Education is the biggest barrier in my learning - Einstein. What do you mean by this? And do you think Einstein was correct in saying that
Education is effort provided by senior members to pass their knowledge to younger generation of society. Modern education system adopted lot of changes in compared to traditional one which was focused mainly on religious, scriptural system, phycology which create a narrow domain for any learner to gain and explore their knowledge. Einstein might have faced such education system and found that hinder in his life. We will discuss positive and negative points of this argument.
Traditional education system in 19th century was mainly focused on set of patterns which was defined by government or educational societies which limit individual to think beyond what they are taught with. Students read same set of questions and answers for academic year and at the end of year evaluated with questions and answers from their academic pattern. Before getting into college also individuals can not decide with what they are best and can do best. They start with something and make that their passion.
On other hand modern education system changed a lot. Now a days schools give more preference to practical education. Academic curriculum includes sport and outdoor activities as well which bring out individuals passions from beginning of their learning days and they can decide easily what they should select as their career and where they can give best.
To conclude Einstein might have faced traditional education system for years and could not broader his views and thought education as a barrier in his life. But schools are essentials for early days and can nurture kids much better way than sitting home and learning from environment.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268817204301 0.268076937826 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.15770609319 0.116061578633 136% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10394265233 0.0759168565197 137% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0358422939068 0.0366838410393 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0573476702509 0.0131127313244 437% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129032258065 0.155750635184 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0465949820789 0.0379272487307 123% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51642902934 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0250896057348 0.0210936926555 119% => OK
Particles: 0.00358422939068 0.00175180941692 205% => OK
Determiners: 0.0286738351254 0.0948980150116 30% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0358422939068 0.00437022459523 820% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0322580645161 0.00967000014798 334% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1696.0 1161.00487805 146% => OK
No of words: 264.0 196.9 134% => OK
Chars per words: 6.42424242424 5.90752243213 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.73763899035 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.397727272727 0.337110787985 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.299242424242 0.247514529752 121% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.204545454545 0.171178102325 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132575757576 0.112407865282 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51642902934 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 106.607317073 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598484848485 0.546246751206 110% => OK
Word variations: 63.3118990011 49.3433353143 128% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 8.93414634146 146% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3076923077 23.0094962315 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.163823816 42.9750493124 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.461538462 135.714022679 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 23.0094962315 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.384615384615 0.689975730869 56% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.48048780488 405% => OK
Readability: 50.2319347319 47.7609492067 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.77142857143 2.94281807926 60% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222202182397 0.418131533498 53% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0725136441322 0.181151798455 40% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0470197474626 0.0850326197045 55% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.507733790328 0.706616315825 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161205835872 0.157042692854 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843102287759 0.228904883108 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496495692731 0.108899403657 46% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.272471364873 0.367819155151 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0296391497566 0.0812612215331 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140274760505 0.316326947829 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377143096917 0.0921553760075 41% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70731707317 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.14146341463 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 4.0 7.1512195122 56% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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