Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
A good neighbor increases the value in one’s life. For this reason, it is most important to what characteristic define a good neighbor. To my mind, a good neighbor is respectful, supportive and companionable. I will explore the reason why I feel this way in the following essay.
To begin with, a good neighbor muse be supportive because our lives are full of unplanned emergencies. Sometime people who are living close to us can provide assistance when things go wrong. For example, we experienced terrible house fire last year. Though none of us suffered any injuries, our situation was aided. By a sociable neighbor who help us to turn the fire off we were passed through that condition. This example demonstrates how supportive neighbor do like a friend in hard situation.
Secondly, a good neighbor should be respectful .It is an indispensable quality which serve as supporting framework for live in peace. For example, I live in an apartment in busy city. My job is extremely stressful. After a day I want nothing more than to go home and unwind. however, a person who is living next me play loud music all night that make it impossible for me to relax.in contrast, the person who is living above me does not do this. This illustrate the value of having neighbor who respects to others.
Companionable is the third characteristic of a good neighbor. It is very important that you make strong communication with your neighbor. For example, last year my friend wanted to visit me. when he arrived I was at work so my next neighbor invited him to his apartment and entertained him for hours. It is an evidence to prove the value of warm relationship.
I strongly believe that good neighbors are supportive, respectful, and companionable. This is because such people can help us handle life’s unexpected emergency and allow us to feel comfortable in own homes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'for example', 'i feel', 'in contrast', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.203856749311 0.229887763892 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.165289256198 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.126721763085 0.0866891130778 146% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0247933884298 0.046263068375 54% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0909090909091 0.0685040099705 133% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.099173553719 0.118717715034 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0192837465565 0.0351676179071 55% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.01753082518 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0330578512397 0.0309702414327 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0826446280992 0.0887237588012 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0110192837466 0.0209618222197 53% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0330578512397 0.0139019557991 238% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1878.0 2387.08602151 79% => OK
No of words: 319.0 408.028673835 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88714733542 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.335423197492 0.338922669872 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.257053291536 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.213166144201 0.174417080927 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.150470219436 0.112833075102 133% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01753082518 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573667711599 0.524397521467 109% => OK
Word variations: 62.6496784626 59.2087087015 106% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 13.8695652174 20.5533526081 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9933220443 48.84282405 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.652173913 120.699889404 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8695652174 20.5533526081 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.434782608696 0.644075263715 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 39.574894371 45.7405998639 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.14705882353 1.45489161554 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306163022815 0.300154397459 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0599906268978 0.103427244359 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0723198050334 0.0752933317313 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.429944462741 0.497263757937 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.123716067742 0.151897553556 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978614631062 0.114077575197 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058384043164 0.0781384742642 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.211749362416 0.336927656856 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0820662041514 0.067059652881 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190300826963 0.210909579961 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301947146386 0.0618886996521 49% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.