Tourism is important to many countries. However its disadvantages should be overlooked. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your opinion.
Tourism has become a vital part in every country's economy. It is a mechanism which shrinks the entire world and brings the countries together and helps a region by bringing the foreign investments. In this essay writer considers the positive and negative aspects of tourism and finally gives her point of view.
One of the main advantages of tourism is as mentioned above, it brings foreign exchange in. This facilitates an economy to grow by getting exposed to international trade. Another benefit would be tourism helps in developing infrastructure and the beautification of the country. Apart from these, local employment opportunities and getting exposed to new culture are also considered to be the other gains of tourism.
However, tourism has its own drawbacks as well. Mainly it increases the over dependency of countries or their influence which leads to economic crisis. There will be artificial inflation and local people will always get 2nd grade goods due to tourism. Traditional occupations such as agriculture will be ignored when tourism is prioritized in a country and also there will be ample of free flow of idealogies or thinking patterns which leads to conflicts within the country.
So when summing up the above pitfalls, tourism is considered to be a bane to a country. Simultaneously, its benefits always overtake the drawbacks. As tourism helps to bring the cash flow in and it helps the economy to grow it has to be considered as a boon to a country. There are lot of ways to overcome the negativities or convert them in to a favorable impact. Countries can identify what are the negative impacts of the tourism on its own and should work on it to make them as the opportunities to grow. Therefore, writer comes to a conclusion that the advantages of tourism are way more than the disadvantages and tourism has to be encouraged in a long term perspective.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'apart from', 'as to', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235294117647 0.247107183377 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.179411764706 0.155533422707 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0735294117647 0.0946595960268 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0411764705882 0.0501214627716 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0382352941176 0.0437548338989 87% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102941176471 0.122226691241 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0470588235294 0.0403226058552 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.98118771997 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0558823529412 0.0326793684256 171% => OK
Particles: 0.00294117647059 0.00163938923432 179% => OK
Determiners: 0.108823529412 0.0861772015684 126% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0205882352941 0.021408717616 96% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0176470588235 0.011925033212 148% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1889.0 1933.35771543 98% => OK
No of words: 317.0 316.048096192 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95899053628 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353312302839 0.374742101984 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.302839116719 0.28420135186 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.201892744479 0.203846283523 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132492113565 0.137316102897 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98118771997 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.037074148 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517350157729 0.56093040696 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.150939332 60.7387585426 88% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6470588235 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3541666489 49.517814964 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.117647059 127.492653851 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.588235294118 0.814263465372 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 48.9309704955 49.1944974215 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.48863636364 1.69124875643 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435698497082 0.332605444948 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0898166589386 0.102741220458 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0866614311973 0.0668466124924 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.536248514793 0.534860350844 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162913739062 0.148594505496 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173744722713 0.134430193775 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738754491488 0.0742795772207 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.378339934942 0.324371583561 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0319786083925 0.0638462369009 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306502303918 0.228012699653 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414591152302 0.058150111329 71% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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