Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Though in this modern society there men and women are treated equally, still there are many areas where women are looked upon as weak. The claim stated is that men and women because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks. According to me this claim is totally fallacious. Be it the field of sports, military , administration or defence, the women are giving their best to be recognised and appreciated. To support my stance I will be taking examples of Malala Yousafzai , Dipa Karnakar and Hillary Clinton.
Malala Yousafzai is a Pakistani girl who wanted the girls of her country to be educated and to be able to standout in the world where her country is famous for terrorism. Education can eradicate poverty and it can uplift a society. In 2013 Malala was part of a conspiracy that involved assassination. She was shot and wounded. Bur her hopes did not die and she recovered. She even won the Nobel Prize Peace Award for the sacrifices that she made so that the women of her country could have a better place to live. By stating this example it is clearly visible that the physical differences did not bring her down.
Dipa Karnakar is an Indian gymnast aged 16. In a country like India , where cricket is the only prominent sport , she was the first ever Indian female gymnast to qualify for Olympics. India has a male dominant society where female infanticide is ubiquitous. In Rio Olympics 2016, Dipa Karnakar got recognition as she came in 4th position in the finals. She used to practice for her gymnast on the scooter.
Hillary Clinton is in contention for the US elections 2016, and she is contesting against Donald trump. She is being contemplated as the next president of United states of America. Any physical differences has not made her lose any hopes.
Though women are considered the weaker gender, but as stated above and also considering many examples we can believe that physical differences can not stop them from conquering the world. They are sometimes emotional but it if put in a situation where they have to show physical as well as mental strength they are not pusillanimous and clearly show that the sex which can give birth to a new life can easliy control the world too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
... are not equally suited for many tasks. According to me this claim is totally fallacious. Be it...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ous. Be it the field of sports, military , administration or defence, the women ar...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...l be taking examples of Malala Yousafzai , Dipa Karnakar and Hillary Clinton. M...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...gymnast aged 16. In a country like India , where cricket is the only prominent spo...
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Suggestion: ,
...here cricket is the only prominent sport , she was the first ever Indian female gy...
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Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...es of America. Any physical differences has not made her lose any hopes. Though ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239336492891 0.240241500013 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.182464454976 0.157235817809 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0876777251185 0.0880659088768 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0450236966825 0.0497285424764 91% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0710900473934 0.0444667217837 160% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.104265402844 0.12292977631 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0450236966825 0.0406280797675 111% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60833736006 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0260663507109 0.030933414821 84% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0781990521327 0.0997080785238 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0189573459716 0.0249443105267 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0189573459716 0.0148568991511 128% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2250.0 2732.02544248 82% => OK
No of words: 393.0 452.878318584 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72519083969 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.318066157761 0.366273622748 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239185750636 0.280924506359 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.160305343511 0.200843997647 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0916030534351 0.132149295362 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60833736006 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 219.290929204 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531806615776 0.48968727796 109% => OK
Word variations: 59.449627461 55.4138127331 107% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8636363636 23.380412469 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0113039559 59.4972553346 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.272727273 141.124799967 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8636363636 23.380412469 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.409090909091 0.674092028746 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 41.7822114272 51.4728631049 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.30158730159 1.64882698954 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400710649303 0.391690518653 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111885785525 0.123202303941 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0828583136559 0.077325440228 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.471483862568 0.547984918172 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.165096139885 0.149214159877 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128200916554 0.161403998019 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944218753831 0.0892212321368 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.24836107704 0.385218514788 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0713863624487 0.0692045440612 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241879532263 0.275328986314 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10068825978 0.0653680567796 154% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88274336283 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.