Yes, agree with statement which says that in this modern world young people must have the ability to plan and organise in order shine up in their carrier life or else life become very horrible. To support my arguments I want to explore some practical events which happens surrounding my environment.
To begin with, earlier people are working in the industrial area, factories, small companies, automobiles and other constructions work, they do not need any king educational qualifications or skilled certificate for their job entry level. So during those time organisation skill and planning skill not that much important. They just got the promotion according to their work experience. Meaning, more you have experience more welcomed and they got very position in the like GM.
But, today in order to enter into the job we must have skilled certificate depending on the job requirements. Even for watch job certain companies asking for the trained certificate and licence exam. If, it is medical field, I need not say there lot of rules and regulations keep changing. For example, even though clear the NPTE certification still, immigration department asking for the extra credit hours to obtain my visa screening certificate.
Further, to get the good job and to hike to higher position one should have ability to plan well, implement that plan in very practical manner then only he/she can be sustained in the job market or else they will be fire at any time without notice. After implemented the plan one must able to organise that very well to keep the institute or business to compete the competitor in business markets.
Finally, if, we have very good planing and organising skill, even the company goes down side by using these skill, we can bring back the company from debt to original status. For example, Infosysis software company once gone bankrupt and it lose millions of dollars in this field but because company GM who has lots of planning and organising skill, he worked hard at the time crisis and he brought back the company in it's original status.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e fire at any time without notice. After implemented the plan one must able to or...
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Message: Did you mean 'downside'?
Suggestion: downside
...organising skill, even the company goes down side by using these skill, we can bring back...
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Line 11, column 103, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this skill' or 'these skills'?
Suggestion: this skill; these skills
...ven the company goes down side by using these skill, we can bring back the company from deb...
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Line 11, column 242, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'loses'?
Suggestion: loses
...tware company once gone bankrupt and it lose millions of dollars in this field but b...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ack the company in its original status.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'well', 'for example', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270341207349 0.229887763892 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.144356955381 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0813648293963 0.0866891130778 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0656167979003 0.046263068375 142% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0551181102362 0.0685040099705 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0971128608924 0.118717715034 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0472440944882 0.0351676179071 134% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63656790868 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0393700787402 0.0309702414327 127% => OK
Particles: 0.00524934383202 0.00188951952338 278% => OK
Determiners: 0.0682414698163 0.0887237588012 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0183727034121 0.0209618222197 88% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.010498687664 0.0139019557991 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2105.0 2387.08602151 88% => OK
No of words: 347.0 408.028673835 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.06628242075 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325648414986 0.338922669872 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.256484149856 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.175792507205 0.174417080927 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118155619597 0.112833075102 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63656790868 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599423631124 0.524397521467 114% => OK
Word variations: 69.7370244215 59.2087087015 118% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 24.7857142857 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1865687894 48.84282405 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.357142857 120.699889404 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.644075263715 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 50.4341292713 45.7405998639 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.56435643564 1.45489161554 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380674809196 0.300154397459 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101541361168 0.103427244359 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0998329149318 0.0752933317313 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.594988387557 0.497263757937 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.170838321522 0.151897553556 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140804679008 0.114077575197 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666717943814 0.0781384742642 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.217530197185 0.336927656856 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0266631803109 0.067059652881 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222543600791 0.210909579961 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487961228565 0.0618886996521 79% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.