the traditional virtue of telling the truth in all situations is increasingly doubted by many in today’s world. many believe that telling the truth is not always the best policy when dealing with people. moreover, the line of a “truth” is becoming more and more vague. this essay will explore the importance of telling the truth in relationships between people.
we all understand that often the truth is offending and may not be a very nice thing to both hear or say. lies or white lies often have their advantages. the manipulation of white lies is the most obvious the business world. how many times have we heard that some product is “the finest” or “the cheapest”? how many times have we heard that products have such and such “magical functions”? advertising is about persuasion, and many would agree that if a company is to tell the absolute truth about it’s products, no one would be interested in even having a look at the products.
the same logic applies to human relationships. if your friend had worn a newly purchased dress on her birthday and energetically asked you if it was a worthy buy, would you freely express your opinion that you had never seen a dress as the one she’s currently wearing? and spoil her birthday? unarguably, hiding(entirely or particially) the truth in some situations can be quite handy indeed. confrontations and disputes can seemingly be avoided.
however, there is always the risk factor of the truth emerging sooner or later when telling an untruth. the basic trust in any relationships(businessman/customer, friends, parents/children) will be blotched, and would have an impact on the future relationship between both parties. the story of the “the boy who cried wolf” fully illustrates the consequenes of telling untruths. no one will believe you when you’re telling the truth. your word will have no weighting.
in addition, another “bad factor” of telling untruths is that you have absolutely no control over when the truth(of previous untruths) will emerge. untruths breed pain in both parties: tears when the truth is uncovered after a period of time; fear and the burden of sharing a “secret”. in the long run, it seems that hiding the truth is not beneficial to either party.
everyone hates betrayal. even if it is the trend to occasionally hide the truth in relationships, it is strongly recommended that not to follow that trend as the risk and the consequences of the truth unfolded overwhelms the minimal advantages one can derive from not telling the truth. afterall, it is understood that relationships are founded on “trust” which goes hand in hand with “truth”. indeed telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. always.
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228873239437 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.146126760563 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0669014084507 0.0866891130778 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0651408450704 0.046263068375 141% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0387323943662 0.0685040099705 57% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0933098591549 0.118717715034 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0475352112676 0.0351676179071 135% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.48399552986 2.67179642975 130% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0105633802817 0.0309702414327 34% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.12323943662 0.0887237588012 139% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0228873239437 0.0209618222197 109% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0176056338028 0.0139019557991 127% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2845.0 2387.08602151 119% => OK
No of words: 455.0 408.028673835 112% => OK
Chars per words: 6.25274725275 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.32967032967 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.274725274725 0.251872472559 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.197802197802 0.174417080927 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.151648351648 0.112833075102 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48399552986 2.67179642975 130% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50989010989 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 58.6189360399 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 16.25 20.5533526081 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.460274425 48.84282405 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.607142857 120.699889404 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.5533526081 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.25 0.644075263715 39% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.54480286738 685% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 43.7225274725 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.47887323944 1.45489161554 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287812990299 0.300154397459 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115983256454 0.103427244359 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108339483769 0.0752933317313 144% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.489447996424 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.196947365337 0.151897553556 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109868605068 0.114077575197 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629619397732 0.0781384742642 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.381031775298 0.336927656856 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.12563201721 0.067059652881 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200932944287 0.210909579961 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356627168627 0.0618886996521 58% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.86379928315 285% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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