It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
We meet different people every day. Everyone has different and unique characteristics. But in my opinion, old friends are the people who are the wealthiest resource of my life.
I have a friend from childhood. We have in touch from 10 years. By now, we know each other very well and we help each other many times. As we can understand each other problems, it is also easier to share and to provide the solution. I can say from my experience that the time I enjoyed the most with the friend, the one whom I knew very well means old friend. On the contrary, when we make new friends, it is the chance that we misunderstand each other or judge in the wrong way. I have made a friend, John, recently from my painting class. As I have the habit to make some jokes, I talked sarcastically with him for fun. He misunderstood me. So, friendship requires efforts and caring.
In my view, keeping old friends is many times greater than to make new friends. However, new friends give variety and excitement. New friends can amaze us. But the way old friend understands over self and helps us in many critical situations is most important thing in our life. In my college years, I made hundreds of friends. We knew each other very superficially. So, I can rhetorically say that we were friends who knew each other's names only!! But, real joy and satisfaction only come from the friends who can deeply know each other. This deep understanding is set with old friends. Hence, it is most vital to keep them with our heart.
Keeping old friends with priority does not mean that we have to stop making new friends. As we like to taste new things, want to experience new places and like to ride different cars and bikes, it is our natural instinct that we like to meet new people with different interest. So, I think we also strive for the new friends and try to be in touch with them. One day, these new friends will be in our list of old friends and we will get richer with this resource of friendship.
It is human nature that when we know people and when we know their dark sides, we do not feel that much influential towards them. It is also applied to making friends. When we make new friends, we are excited about each other but as the time passes, we are not as excited as before.So, it is our responsibility know the true value of the friend. True friends are not alway excited and amazing. But when we understand their value, we believe they are the most important people in our lives. So, in my opinion, it is more important to keep your old and true valuable friends than it is to make new friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 283, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...passes, we are not as excited as before.So, it is our responsibility know the true...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'i think', 'in my opinion', 'in my view', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.177449168207 0.229887763892 77% => OK
Verbs: 0.164510166359 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110905730129 0.0866891130778 128% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0609981515712 0.046263068375 132% => OK
Pronouns: 0.121996303142 0.0685040099705 178% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0924214417745 0.118717715034 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0203327171904 0.0351676179071 58% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47511836838 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0258780036969 0.0309702414327 84% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0609981515712 0.0887237588012 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0129390018484 0.0209618222197 62% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0166358595194 0.0139019557991 120% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2601.0 2387.08602151 109% => OK
No of words: 480.0 408.028673835 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41875 5.86048508987 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.254166666667 0.338922669872 75% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.1875 0.251872472559 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.116666666667 0.174417080927 67% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.06875 0.112833075102 61% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47511836838 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.429166666667 0.524397521467 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.0795866091 59.2087087015 81% => OK
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6684587814 160% => OK
Sentence length: 14.5454545455 20.5533526081 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4510232422 48.84282405 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8181818182 120.699889404 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 20.5533526081 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.644075263715 52% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 33.2954545455 45.7405998639 73% => OK
Elegance: 0.835106382979 1.45489161554 57% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405109025049 0.300154397459 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113569798306 0.103427244359 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0964445957395 0.0752933317313 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.417269762907 0.497263757937 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152684941429 0.151897553556 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134657025407 0.114077575197 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166520099771 0.0781384742642 213% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.355950367152 0.336927656856 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0925737657319 0.067059652881 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266789770635 0.210909579961 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140857965148 0.0618886996521 228% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 27.0 11.8870967742 227% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 21.0 8.42114695341 249% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.6433691756 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.