Younger people enjoy life more than older people do.
In my opinion, the younger I am, the more enjoying life is. In this essay, I want to express my beliefs and experiences to support this argument.
In the second year of college, after two weeks of the term, I was having headache throughout the day. But, I ignored it. After few days I lost my weight by 10 kg and I couldn't able to concentrate on my studies. Even I couldn't able to qualify in university cricket team. At that moment, I realized the reason behind these all consequences. This experience showed me the importance of health. Today, I'm highly health conscious. In my opinion, a healthier person can achieve and enjoy more. Most of the young people have good health than older people. However, some older people have good health. This is the fundamental advantage for younger people. Younger people have very sharp reflexes also. These bodily benefits give more resilience towards injuries and other sicknesses. So, it helps to have greater enjoyment to younger people.
Whenever we were a child, we imagined flying with the curtain. Even the wandering inside the home was the fun!! This is because the child has no stress and limitations. Another reason for their happiness is hope. According to me, optimism generated joy. Most of the younger people have dreams to do something out of the box and to change the world. These types of dreams are the driving force for their achievements. As they achieve, they become happier. They enjoy life with the challenges. This perspective, younger people have, makes them more joyful.
From all of above reasons, younger people are more enthusiastic and healthier. It helps to achieve greater enjoyment in life.
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- TOEFL Official Guide - Practice Test 2 - Integrated Writing - Professors on TV 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- Younger people enjoy life more than older people do. 73
- It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. 76
- Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved theway people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I'm
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Suggestion: as well
...Younger people have very sharp reflexes also. These bodily benefits give more resili...
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...her reason for their happiness is hope. According to me, optimism generated joy. Most of the yo...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225609756098 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.143292682927 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0975609756098 0.0866891130778 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0335365853659 0.046263068375 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0792682926829 0.0685040099705 116% => OK
Prepositions: 0.106707317073 0.118717715034 90% => OK
Participles: 0.015243902439 0.0351676179071 43% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.59677391136 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.030487804878 0.0309702414327 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.109756097561 0.0887237588012 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0030487804878 0.0209618222197 15% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0139019557991 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1671.0 2387.08602151 70% => OK
No of words: 282.0 408.028673835 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92553191489 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.48200974243 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.368794326241 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.265957446809 0.251872472559 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.159574468085 0.174417080927 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0957446808511 0.112833075102 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59677391136 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59219858156 0.524397521467 113% => OK
Word variations: 63.5356702386 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0714285714 20.5533526081 49% => Sentence lengths are too short.
Sentence length SD: 19.1616046258 48.84282405 39% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.6785714286 120.699889404 49% => More chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.0714285714 20.5533526081 49% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.285714285714 0.644075263715 44% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 36.6671732523 45.7405998639 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.35714285714 1.45489161554 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256242984633 0.300154397459 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0839865961082 0.103427244359 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.119282701688 0.0752933317313 158% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.351836553043 0.497263757937 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161278543172 0.151897553556 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797121223288 0.114077575197 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100494984766 0.0781384742642 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.295235024546 0.336927656856 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.113675233796 0.067059652881 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172224344864 0.210909579961 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664626302959 0.0618886996521 107% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8870967742 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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