Television advertising directed toward young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Today,many advertisements are addressed to young c...
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Suggestion: For
...sements are addressed to young children.For example, advertisements related to soap...
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Suggestion: , shampoo
... example, advertisements related to soap,shampoo or other things of children.Many of the...
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...oap,shampoo or other things of children.Many of these advertisements have not approp...
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Suggestion: These
...ve not appropriate content for children.These type of content can harm the childrens ...
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... the childrens mentality and behavior. Studies show that we tend to change ou...
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Suggestion: the surrounding conditions
...ange our behavior or thinking regarding the conditions around us.Television plays an important role in t...
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Suggestion: Television
...king regarding the conditions around us.Television plays an important role in todays life....
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... plays an important role in todays life.A normal family tends to spend their time...
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...me on television about 2 hours each day.So the children are exposed to the various...
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Suggestion: So
...rious advertisements on the daily basis.So some harmful advertisements can change ...
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...n change the behavior of children badly.For example, it was shown in the television...
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Suggestion: Children
...mp on the roof after eating the biscuit.Children dont have their own decision-making abi...
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Suggestion: don't
... roof after eating the biscuit.Children dont have their own decision-making ability....
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Suggestion: Hence
... have their own decision-making ability.Hence,they absorb all the information around ...
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... their own decision-making ability.Hence,they absorb all the information around them ...
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...ion around them and try to emulate that.We can see these type of imitations while ...
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Suggestion: So
... open the fridge or starts a television.So,parents should limit the television cha...
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...pen the fridge or starts a television.So,parents should limit the television channels or...
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Suggestion: But
...hild while imitating some bad behaviors.But it is not the total solution.Parents ca...
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Suggestion: Parents
...aviors.But it is not the total solution.Parents cant stop the natural development proce...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ut it is not the total solution.Parents cant stop the natural development process of...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...t process of a child totally means they cant control all the behaviors of the child....
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Suggestion:
...ontrol all the behaviors of the child. On the other side, few harmless adverti...
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... other side, few harmless advertisements can also make bad changes in the behavio...
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...changes in the behavior the young child.For example,a advertise shows a child drink...
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...the behavior the young child.For example,a advertise shows a child drinking milk w...
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...he behavior the young child.For example,a advertise shows a child drinking milk w...
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...he behavior the young child.For example,a advertise shows a child drinking milk with protei...
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Suggestion: Now
...lk with protein powder from the kitchen.Now, when the young child tries to imitate ...
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...powder should be taken from the kitchen.So it is possible he mistakenly takes some...
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...e he mistakenly takes something harmful.Now,the question is how to stop these harmf...
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...e mistakenly takes something harmful.Now,the question is how to stop these harmful c...
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...is how to stop these harmful conditions.But,I think we rather should take steps to ...
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...how to stop these harmful conditions.But,I think we rather should take steps to re...
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...e steps to reduce these circumstances. So,in my opinion, television advertisin...
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...s to reduce these circumstances. So,in my opinion, television advertising regu...
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...these harmful pictures from advertising.In addition to these steps,parents should ...
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...m advertising.In addition to these steps,parents should take care of behaviors of the ch...
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...uld take care of behaviors of the child.It is required that they keep an eye on th...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'e.g.', 'hence', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in my opinion']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.277008310249 0.229887763892 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.171745152355 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0886426592798 0.0866891130778 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0277008310249 0.046263068375 60% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0443213296399 0.0685040099705 65% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102493074792 0.118717715034 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0304709141274 0.0351676179071 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.47146361933 2.67179642975 130% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0332409972299 0.0309702414327 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.130193905817 0.0887237588012 147% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0277008310249 0.0209618222197 132% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00831024930748 0.0139019557991 60% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2179.0 2387.08602151 91% => OK
No of words: 332.0 408.028673835 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.56325301205 5.86048508987 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.376506024096 0.338922669872 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295180722892 0.251872472559 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.237951807229 0.174417080927 136% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.171686746988 0.112833075102 152% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47146361933 2.67179642975 130% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557228915663 0.524397521467 106% => OK
Word variations: 60.4840407455 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6684587814 24% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 66.4 20.5533526081 323% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 157.880461109 48.84282405 323% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 435.8 120.699889404 361% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.4 20.5533526081 323% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.4 0.644075263715 373% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.54480286738 721% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 95.9180722892 45.7405998639 210% => OK
Elegance: 1.68181818182 1.45489161554 116% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146512315724 0.300154397459 49% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.339976883273 0.103427244359 329% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0351732032684 0.0752933317313 47% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.927767464463 0.497263757937 187% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.100784755731 0.151897553556 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103968527361 0.114077575197 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0175922794986 0.0781384742642 23% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.408955373886 0.336927656856 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0777046403573 0.067059652881 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111163281512 0.210909579961 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151454751125 0.0618886996521 24% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8870967742 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 8.42114695341 12% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 13.6433691756 37% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.