Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Nowadays, there is no doubt that in modern societies, job condition plays an important role in people's lives. When it comes to the job satisfaction, there are many controversial issues which people occasionally mention. By considering the topic, some people believe who do many different tasks in work day are more satisfied, while others contend workers who do similar tasks in their work are more satisfied. I agree with the second one. Through the following paragraphs, I will try to substantiate some noticeable attitudes toward the subject.
First and foremost, I convincingly believe workers who do same tasks are more satisfied for the reason that they work quickly without more thinking. For instance, one of my closest friends is a teacher. He is a professional teacher in math and when he teaches his students, they understand the course quickly but when he teaches physics, the students don't understand as quick(fast) as they know math because my friend doesn't teach physics always. So, they prefer to learn math by my friend and another teacher trains physics.
Furthermore, another point may be proposed to support the second group's idea is that when people do the same works their efficiency will increase and they can make more products at the same time rather than they do different tasks. So, they receive more money and they will be happier. These tasks increase their job satisfaction and they try to work better to make more money.
Despite the fact mentioned, what has been discussed in the preceding paragraphs is not absolutely correct. Other sides of the issue need to be investigated to elucidate some noticeable points of this subject. Accordingly, some people may hold the standpoint that workers who do different works in their job are more satisfied. For instance, my nephew told me that when he works in different tasks, he is more satisfied since he is more active and he learns more things in workdays.
To sum up a conclusion based on aforementioned ideas, the viewpoint of those who believe working in the same tasks make us more satisfied is more accept occasionally, though the examples I mentioned about being more active are too specific and fairly rare that should not be taken as a general rule. Therefore, I can safely endorse my viewpoint.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many
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...t when he teaches physics, the students dont understand as quickfast as they know ma...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...ast as they know math because my friend doesnt teach physics always. So, they prefer t...
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Suggestion: groups'; group's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... try to work better to make more money. Despite the fact mentioned, what has bee...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'for instance', 'no doubt', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.200477326969 0.229887763892 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.17661097852 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105011933174 0.0866891130778 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0715990453461 0.046263068375 155% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0811455847255 0.0685040099705 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0930787589499 0.118717715034 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0214797136038 0.0351676179071 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74351419986 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0214797136038 0.0309702414327 69% => OK
Particles: 0.00238663484487 0.00188951952338 126% => OK
Determiners: 0.0787589498807 0.0887237588012 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0190930787589 0.0209618222197 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0310262529833 0.0139019557991 223% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2284.0 2387.08602151 96% => OK
No of words: 381.0 408.028673835 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.99475065617 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.356955380577 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.259842519685 0.251872472559 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181102362205 0.174417080927 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141732283465 0.112833075102 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74351419986 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530183727034 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 58.5793255659 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.1666666667 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.3085799904 48.84282405 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.888888889 120.699889404 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.722222222222 0.644075263715 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 47.1509186352 45.7405998639 103% => OK
Elegance: 0.95652173913 1.45489161554 66% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393416564372 0.300154397459 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111736231896 0.103427244359 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.083737992512 0.0752933317313 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.49963460687 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.185345026971 0.151897553556 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131133604875 0.114077575197 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967807140899 0.0781384742642 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.26400294378 0.336927656856 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0463287239735 0.067059652881 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245455506662 0.210909579961 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618538743987 0.0618886996521 100% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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