A true university education encompasses far more than the narrow, specialized study of a single discipline. Only through exploring the broad spectrum of liberal arts courses can students become truly learned.
" Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world" as quoted by Nelson Mandela. Indeed it is true that the education that we have is not just about knowing the well-formed concepts and tested ideas, but is also a mechanism of allowing a person to think and create new ideas. So, in my opinion a true university must encompass far more than the narrow or specialized study of a single field. Since, it is through the exposure and by exploring wide spectrum of liberal arts courses that students become truly learned. As, the children of a nation are its future.
A true university should provide wide variety of courses for students to learn as the students would get the general knowledge about the arts, humanities and natural sciences which is quite important. So, if a university just provides a education that encompasses specialization of a single discipline it might happen that the student get the well-known knowledge of the field but he won't have knowledge about other things which are quite essential now-a-days. Since, literature and history have plenty number of things to be taught to students they also provide knowledge to the students about how the innovation took place. A liberal arts education also provides invaluable set of employability skills, including the ability to think, and capacity for lifelong learning. Moreover, these are the qualities which the companies offering job look for as well. Liberal arts would also provide solid base to education and improve your analytical thinking. And, with the advent of new technologies one should have diversed knowledge about things happening around and should have openness to these new inventions and upcoming technologies.
For example, if a university provide education just about the specialized study of a single discipline and if student opt for the Electronics field so, he would just get the knowledge about that field. But, he won't acquire the employability skills required like lifelong learning of new upcoming technologies and moreover he would have knowledge about the other fields and liberal arts , so would be reluctant to the new innovating ideas and technology.
So, in my opinion the university should encompass far more things than the specialization of single field which would provide innovative thinking and required skill set to the students and lifelong learning ability.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'of course', 'in my opinion', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25 0.240241500013 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.13679245283 0.157235817809 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10141509434 0.0880659088768 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0589622641509 0.0497285424764 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0330188679245 0.0444667217837 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110849056604 0.12292977631 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0353773584906 0.0406280797675 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81145331301 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0259433962264 0.030933414821 84% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.10141509434 0.0997080785238 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0306603773585 0.0249443105267 123% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0188679245283 0.0148568991511 127% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2411.0 2732.02544248 88% => OK
No of words: 389.0 452.878318584 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.19794344473 6.0361032391 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.40616966581 0.366273622748 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.303341902314 0.280924506359 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.236503856041 0.200843997647 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.149100257069 0.132149295362 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81145331301 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 219.290929204 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460154241645 0.48968727796 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.7398270076 55.4138127331 88% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 25.9333333333 23.380412469 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5961494926 59.4972553346 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.733333333 141.124799967 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9333333333 23.380412469 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.674092028746 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 56.2675235647 51.4728631049 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.73195876289 1.64882698954 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398537310943 0.391690518653 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104393564462 0.123202303941 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0729153832262 0.077325440228 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.564174244976 0.547984918172 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.182842407303 0.149214159877 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180928565209 0.161403998019 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942254098742 0.0892212321368 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.49654102679 0.385218514788 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0982169228002 0.0692045440612 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287026212117 0.275328986314 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774842910048 0.0653680567796 119% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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