People now live a more longevity life than past in the result of constantly improving science and technology. Cloning organs provide a more practical way when people want to live a longer life after seniority. Some people find this idea horrifying. However, in my opinion, this is a scientific method to extend life. In this essay, I will talk about reasons why it is appliable.
The first reason is the scientific method is mature for cloning organs. After 30 years of improvement and a magnitude of experiments on animals, cloning organs are more mature and it is ready to test on human organs. Actually scientists have successfully cloned human ear on the back of a mouse. Even though defective clone organ sometimes happens, the clone technology is becoming precisely accurate.
The second reason is organ transplantation is well developed for clone organs. Nowadays transplant an organ from a donor is common in the world. The wildly use of antirejection medicine made donate organ adjust to the body. When comes to the transportation of cloned organ, body will adjust to the new organ naturally without the influence of antirejection medicine.
The third reason is people want to live a longer life for some reasons. Some people want to live longer to finish a life goal. some people eager to live longer to see the birth of grandchild. some people craving to live longer to pass their wisdom to next generation. With clone organs, their dream will come true. Clone organ will provided them with a younger body to finish with their life goal.
In conclusion, clone organs is practical to provide people who craving to live a longer life with a younger body.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'well', 'in conclusion', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270967741935 0.247107183377 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.161290322581 0.155533422707 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0967741935484 0.0946595960268 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0516129032258 0.0501214627716 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0258064516129 0.0437548338989 59% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0967741935484 0.122226691241 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0322580645161 0.0403226058552 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68326095294 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0548387096774 0.0326793684256 168% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.112903225806 0.0861772015684 131% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0129032258065 0.021408717616 60% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0129032258065 0.011925033212 108% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1677.0 1933.35771543 87% => OK
No of words: 282.0 316.048096192 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94680851064 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.358156028369 0.374742101984 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.209219858156 0.28420135186 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152482269504 0.203846283523 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117021276596 0.137316102897 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68326095294 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.037074148 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489361702128 0.56093040696 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.3055278939 60.7387585426 78% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.1 20.7743622355 68% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9533540027 49.517814964 56% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.85 127.492653851 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1 20.7743622355 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 35.0219858156 49.1944974215 71% => OK
Elegance: 1.67567567568 1.69124875643 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426872145019 0.332605444948 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.221629373793 0.102741220458 216% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.152649201291 0.0668466124924 228% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.555473168317 0.534860350844 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.172226634933 0.148594505496 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15954833279 0.134430193775 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740140602825 0.0742795772207 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.32954330041 0.324371583561 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.123476112585 0.0638462369009 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266717757292 0.228012699653 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468636521606 0.058150111329 81% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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