People attend college and university for many different reasons.Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I believe that education has a very important role in our future career. People attend college and university for many different reasons. Some people are not decided what they want for their future and go to college just for a new experience. Others take their education very serious. The last ones choose to go to college to prepare for their future career.
I personally believe that people attend colleges or universities to increase their knowledge and to prepare for a career. In the following paragraphs I will use some reasons and example to support my opinion.
First important aspect to be considered is that in college the level of study is higher and more deep. For example if you study Biology you will have lecture classes as well as laboratory work and studies. The combination of practical and theoretical courses helps the student to understand better the new concept.
Second, the more knowledge you have, the better you are prepared for a future career. For example: in College or University the students are required to make different presentations or projects. This involves reading a lot of material, preparation and organization. All these projects will sharpen your organizational skills, which are very important in a new career.
Ultimately, a higher education gives you a better position in the society. You will be able to meet people that are at the same level of education which makes communication engaging and more enjoyable.
In the conclusion, people that attend college or university will be not only prepare for a better career, but will also have a better position in the community.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242320819113 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.150170648464 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105802047782 0.0866891130778 122% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0477815699659 0.046263068375 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0580204778157 0.0685040099705 85% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0921501706485 0.118717715034 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0170648464164 0.0351676179071 49% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.82437793418 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.037542662116 0.0309702414327 121% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0955631399317 0.0887237588012 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0204778156997 0.0209618222197 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0136518771331 0.0139019557991 98% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1646.0 2387.08602151 69% => OK
No of words: 268.0 408.028673835 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.14179104478 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.48200974243 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.39552238806 0.338922669872 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.313432835821 0.251872472559 124% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19776119403 0.174417080927 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.134328358209 0.112833075102 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82437793418 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488805970149 0.524397521467 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.4102184802 59.2087087015 78% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 15.7647058824 20.5533526081 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2848615137 48.84282405 56% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8235294118 120.699889404 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7647058824 20.5533526081 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.529411764706 0.644075263715 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 47.1079894644 45.7405998639 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.37333333333 1.45489161554 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33316632151 0.300154397459 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0993455177091 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0899623446981 0.0752933317313 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.552925108095 0.497263757937 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181261673403 0.151897553556 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138773117313 0.114077575197 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15844261917 0.0781384742642 203% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.284197647781 0.336927656856 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.049264859776 0.067059652881 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198588972709 0.210909579961 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833099390085 0.0618886996521 135% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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