The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These are pie charts, which demonstrate proportion of population in different age groups both in Yemen and Italy in 2000 and 2050. A marginal variation in composition is observed in Yemen, whereas the composition is fairly similar in Italy in mentioned years.
The highest percentage of 50.1% is recorded in Yemen in the year 2000 in the age group of 0 - 14 years. On contrast, the proportion of particular age group is the lowest in Italy in same year. On the other hand, the elderly population, who are 60 years and above are the least in Yemen in 2000, whereas the percentage is nearly eight times higher in Italy and ranked second in overall population proportion.
In addition, 15 - 59 years age group is expected to be the highest in 2050 in Yemen, which which will consists more than half of the country's population and will be followed by 0 - 14 years group. Similarly, Italy will also record the highest proportion in 15 - 59 years age group, but with a lesser percentage.
In conclusion, both the countries predict the same percentage of population to be in mentioned age groups.
- It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be.Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together.Include any relevant examples from your experience 56
- Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skillsDo you agree or disagree 74
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- Nowadays people mostly use cars rather than bicycles as a transportation preference What effects are caused by this trend What can be done to encourage the public to use bicycles 78
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Suggestion: which
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'second', 'similarly', 'so', 'whereas', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272300469484 0.268076937826 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.103286384977 0.116061578633 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.093896713615 0.0759168565197 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0234741784038 0.0366838410393 64% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.159624413146 0.155750635184 102% => OK
Participles: 0.018779342723 0.0379272487307 50% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.76251821462 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0093896713615 0.0210936926555 45% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0892018779343 0.0948980150116 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0140845070423 0.00437022459523 322% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.018779342723 0.00967000014798 194% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1098.0 1161.00487805 95% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.9 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68911917098 5.90752243213 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73763899035 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.305699481865 0.337110787985 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.227979274611 0.247514529752 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170984455959 0.171178102325 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.134715025907 0.112407865282 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76251821462 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481865284974 0.546246751206 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 40.5092736697 49.3433353143 82% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 24.125 23.0094962315 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4836365557 42.9750493124 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.25 135.714022679 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 23.0094962315 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 0.689975730869 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 46.9229274611 47.7609492067 98% => OK
Elegance: 3.55555555556 2.94281807926 121% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404461421485 0.418131533498 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.270495317083 0.181151798455 149% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.101657177526 0.0850326197045 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.816443321727 0.706616315825 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0893423242403 0.157042692854 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.249279561383 0.228904883108 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841313920851 0.108899403657 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.46726581929 0.367819155151 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.108599485184 0.0812612215331 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294217828623 0.316326947829 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869683050436 0.0921553760075 94% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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