Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries many small local businesses are unable to compete some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Recently, the expansion of supermarkets has an obvious influence on societies and the selection of local people, besides, it affected the local markets to became less popular and have less business trade in comparison with the past. In my point of view I absorb that the supermarkets win the competition between themselves and small local markets due to the fact that gathering all the product in one place and provide simple shopping by saving the time, moreover, the price of each product in the supermarket prevent wasting of the money.
Shopping in supermarkets saves money and time. Nowadays, in modern life, people faced with a lack of time and they would appreciate it if they can buy all their needs in an hour instead of driving and parking their car in the different places all around the city. What's more, often in a supermarket the products might have lower costs to attract the customer and offer the best quality by some percentage off, therefore, there might have benefits for both part of the trade, customer and the producer. The money saving and the lack of time consuming encourage people to choose supermarkets instead of small local markets.
In my view, local businesses are not essentially the base of local communities, so if the citizen stops buying their needs from local markets it does not mean that the locality of their life disappears. Local communities could continue their activities in the form of local theater, or local gathering to do sport in public places such as park or gym.
In conclusion, the use of supermarkets instead of small markets rapidly growth and in my opinion local societies revives by replacing other activities instead of shopping.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.285714285714 0.247107183377 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.0974025974026 0.155533422707 63% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0909090909091 0.0946595960268 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0454545454545 0.0501214627716 91% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0487012987013 0.0437548338989 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.152597402597 0.122226691241 125% => OK
Participles: 0.025974025974 0.0403226058552 64% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66091901082 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0162337662338 0.0326793684256 50% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00324675324675 0.00163938923432 198% => OK
Determiners: 0.113636363636 0.0861772015684 132% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0162337662338 0.021408717616 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1697.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 316.048096192 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97535211268 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.323943661972 0.374742101984 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.264084507042 0.28420135186 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176056338028 0.203846283523 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130281690141 0.137316102897 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66091901082 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549295774648 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 56.0401689206 60.7387585426 92% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0891783567 56% => OK
Sentence length: 31.5555555556 20.7743622355 152% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.4704462793 49.517814964 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.555555556 127.492653851 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5555555556 20.7743622355 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 57.9640062598 49.1944974215 118% => OK
Elegance: 2.42372881356 1.69124875643 143% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.529550101829 0.332605444948 159% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.175519200807 0.102741220458 171% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0508209165353 0.0668466124924 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.732481487661 0.534860350844 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.175016691646 0.148594505496 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.286968783058 0.134430193775 213% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10265215002 0.0742795772207 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.4143361616 0.324371583561 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.151354423616 0.0638462369009 237% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.376197753534 0.228012699653 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732677307468 0.058150111329 126% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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