Do you agree or disagree with this sentence?in the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better to make decision about their lives
The question is whether in the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better to make decision about their lives or not. In my vantage point, this view is true somewhat and there some reasons that can affirm it. My arguments and reasons are listed below that will strengthen my point of view:
First of all, improving technology is the strongest argument of being independent of young generation. Nowadays, young people access to variety information in a widespread volume; consequently the need of getting advice from parents has removed. High speed of internet and advanced tools has created a bed for young people to connect to wherever in the world; hence their mind is able to decide logically with studying and watching the most up-date scientific news.
Second, being busy parents is another noticeable support for this occurrence. since today the society meets economic crisis, so the families are forced to work for a long time during the day.
Besides, in the past if it was custom that only men were working, it has changed now. The women also have accepted the task of working in out. As a result, young people have boosted self-sufficient skill. For instance, my mother is a nurse and does not have enough time for me and my brother. Her job helped us to become to an independent person who make our all decisions alone.
Third, blurring relationship in the families has caused youth to more incline toward their friends. It goes without saying when a person spends his time with his friends, spontaneously their effect on person’s life will appear. In the past because of existing populous families, young people were exploring from their siblings’ behaviors, in contrast there are not such an opportunity for them.
As I have illustrated, this belief has believed in the society that young cortex is more independent than the past. It is a positive change because the country will confront with a mature generation that will rise up country’s power.
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Essay evaluation report
High speed of internet and advanced tools has created
High speed of internet and advanced tools have created
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 25 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 343 350
No. of Characters: 1645 1500
No. of Different Words: 199 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.304 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.796 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.507 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 118 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 83 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 53 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.176 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.671 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.588 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.3 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.498 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.073 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...noticeable support for this occurrence. since today the society meets economic crisis...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'consequently', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'for instance', 'in contrast', 'as a result', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238461538462 0.229887763892 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0948717948718 0.0866891130778 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0435897435897 0.046263068375 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0641025641026 0.0685040099705 94% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123076923077 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0564102564103 0.0351676179071 160% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67318800164 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.025641025641 0.0309702414327 83% => OK
Particles: 0.0025641025641 0.00188951952338 136% => OK
Determiners: 0.0897435897436 0.0887237588012 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0128205128205 0.0209618222197 61% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0102564102564 0.0139019557991 74% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2052.0 2387.08602151 86% => OK
No of words: 343.0 408.028673835 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98250728863 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.361516034985 0.338922669872 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.256559766764 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172011661808 0.174417080927 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0932944606414 0.112833075102 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67318800164 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600583090379 0.524397521467 115% => OK
Word variations: 69.718992837 59.2087087015 118% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 20.1764705882 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9728368725 48.84282405 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.705882353 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.823529411765 0.644075263715 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 45.8324472646 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.52336448598 1.45489161554 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435469446098 0.300154397459 145% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0819660901797 0.103427244359 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0620128526631 0.0752933317313 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.525439803687 0.497263757937 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131427544427 0.151897553556 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146946611952 0.114077575197 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168871874817 0.0781384742642 216% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.201788516753 0.336927656856 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0390657175666 0.067059652881 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235412996912 0.210909579961 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121327828955 0.0618886996521 196% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.