Do you agree or dis agree? because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability of plan and organize.
The question is whether because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability of plan and organize or not. In my vantage point, having a potential plan can assist youth to achieve their goal faster and a lot of other advantages will appear. . My arguments and reasons are listed below which will strengthen my point of view:
First, in a simple language a plan prevents from confusing. Nowadays people wrestling with numerous problems due to complexity of their work, consequently having an appropriate program is able to guide them in the best way. Such a great plan creates a bed of peace and confident for young people who will be sure how to handle their daily schedule. Admittedly the existence a schedule stimulates them to broaden the scope of their activity. When youth are involved in variety of activities, their mind's performance will rise up; also improving of their function on daily life will be obvious.
Second, designing a program for life can lead youth to achieve a success peak in any ground. In fact a plan for managing life is the first step toward arriving the future's goals. It is vital for everyone to know that what goal he wants to pursue in the future, otherwise going toward future will not only be vain, but also it will make young people bewildered. This simple plan for daily work is as a precious treasure, because it reinforces ability of organizing in young people.
Third, despite of complications of life, everyone needs to entertainment and being joyful, subsequently it goes without saying that designing such a worthwhile plan can aid to youth to have some amusements with their friend beside these troubles, so from this way, their gone energy will return.
As I have illustrated in above, planning a program for life is the most fundamental base of
Everyone’s life. This useful plan will guide youth in the most valid routh and also amplify organized ability in them in the other parts.
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Essay evaluation report
having a potential plan can assist youth to achieve their goal faster
having a potential plan can assist youths to achieve their goals faster
Nowadays people wrestling with numerous problems
Nowadays people are wrestling with numerous problems
Such a great plan creates a bed of peace and confident for young people
Such a great plan creates a bed of peace and confidence for young people
When youth are involved in
When youths are involved in
Sentence: This useful plan will guide youth in the most valid routh and also amplify organized ability in them in the other parts.
Error: routh Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 338 350
No. of Characters: 1592 1500
No. of Different Words: 186 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.288 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.71 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.531 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 105 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 75 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 53 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.533 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.793 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.533 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.33 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.482 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.113 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'while', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.229946524064 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.163101604278 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0989304812834 0.0866891130778 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0401069518717 0.046263068375 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0561497326203 0.0685040099705 82% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128342245989 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0534759358289 0.0351676179071 152% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62861487691 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0320855614973 0.0309702414327 104% => OK
Particles: 0.00267379679144 0.00188951952338 142% => OK
Determiners: 0.0855614973262 0.0887237588012 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0320855614973 0.0209618222197 153% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0133689839572 0.0139019557991 96% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1977.0 2387.08602151 83% => OK
No of words: 339.0 408.028673835 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83185840708 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.324483775811 0.338922669872 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241887905605 0.251872472559 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.159292035398 0.174417080927 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106194690265 0.112833075102 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62861487691 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557522123894 0.524397521467 106% => OK
Word variations: 60.9617694418 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 22.6 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8763911924 48.84282405 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.8 120.699889404 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.644075263715 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 46.7887905605 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.58762886598 1.45489161554 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398456747564 0.300154397459 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0835887059954 0.103427244359 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0480724842926 0.0752933317313 64% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.543185178129 0.497263757937 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.256021575734 0.151897553556 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164162074309 0.114077575197 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158998471658 0.0781384742642 203% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.220000720875 0.336927656856 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0967254762925 0.067059652881 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232805835797 0.210909579961 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114306535331 0.0618886996521 185% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.