When talking about jobs, a gender perference can be seen in certain ones. The job of police officer requires qualification and some other necessities like robust body and warm heart. The phenominer of female working as police officer induces heated centention. Personally, I think women can be police officers and I will demonstrate reasons to bolster my opinion.
Firstly, the foundmental priciple of entring an occupation is qualification. If a female acquired the qualification of being a policewomen, she should be allowed to work in this field. She can work on the same position as long as she obtained the relate qualification. For instance, a girl graduated from police school can work as a policewoman after successfully finishing her education.
Secondly, female's weakness of physical strength can enforced with technology. The vulnarable body is securitely protected by bulled-proof vest. Advanced weapon protects policewomen in face of fierce attact. Cars provide speed when female police officer need to chase suspects. As a metter of fact, all the weakness of humane can be surmounted with advancing technology.
Thirdly and lastly, a warm heart is the advantage of female police officer over male policeman. Female is better at expressing the soft part of humane like kindness and consideration for other people than male. This is extremely important after a disater because people are fritent and desperitely need caring. That is when female police officer are badly needed.
To recapitulate, female has disadvantage when working as a police officer. However, this can be circumvented with the support of advanced science and technology. More over, female have the advantage of warm heart and consideration, that are rarely experssed by male. In my opinion, women can be police officer on the permise of acquiring the relate qualification.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a policewoman' or simply 'policewomen'?
Suggestion: a policewoman; policewomen
...ale acquired the qualification of being a policewomen, she should be allowed to work in this ...
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Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e same position as long as she obtained the relate qualification. For instance, a girl gra...
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Line 9, column 339, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ice officer on the permise of acquiring the relate qualification.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, i think, talking about, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39931740614 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04323200748 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556313993174 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 17.8554284891 49.4020404114 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.3333333333 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9523809524 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21838205571 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672057775764 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652194069523 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130268696758 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665905614524 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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