This is an era of migration in its peak due to many reasons war, famine e.t.c.However there is always been conflict due to different cultures and its always been a big question whether the host country should accept the culture of migrants or the migrants should change their culture and tradition according to the new situation.I personally believe a host nation should accept different cultures and must respect the migrants right to live in their own way
To begin with, culture and traditions cannot be removed from human beings all of a sudden. The migrants live with their culture for decades and they cannot leave it suddenly.If they do so they will loose their identity and self esteem.A individual with no self esteem and confidence cannot contribute anything to the society.But if a migrant society is allowed to live with their own culture ,they could make extra ordinary contributions for their host country.For example,the Indian migrants in Canada got enough freedom to live up to their culture and gradually they became more productive for their new country.In the present Canadian ministry, involves four ministers with Indian origin.
Another important point , the migrants who following the old culture and religious activities in the new country get some mental relief in the new atmosphere .Their culture and rituals are the only things they have their own, all other things they lost may be due to war,famine or some other causes.So it is cruel, if any host country try to annihilate these pure things from them.Finally, different cultures bring diversity to the host nation.It is very nice to see that people with different culture living together in harmony.
To conclude, i certainly believe the host country should welcome all the cultural differences.Government in these nations should make sure the migrants right to the freedom by the book.
- It is more important for school children to learn about their local history than the world history. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples. 56
- The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world. 73
- "Some people argue teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them. Others believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. Discuss both views and how do you think about it?" 91
- some people think that government should impose strict control of the usage of water. to what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement. 67
- Nowadays young people prefer going to shopping centres rather than spending their time in organised activities such as sport or music Do you think this is a positive or a negative development Give reasons to support your opinion using your own knowledge a 74
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, so, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16118421053 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76971373302 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546052631579 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 76.0 20.2975951904 374% => Sentence_length is too long
Sentence length SD: 164.496960458 49.4020404114 333% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 392.25 106.682146367 368% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 76.0 20.7667163134 366% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.5 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts,knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212128562485 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166021696275 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858290124185 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168878254606 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842277947682 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.9 13.0946893788 312% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -5.66 50.2224549098 -11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.9 11.3001002004 291% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.4 10.1190380762 320% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
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Always put a space after punctuation marks. Essay e-grader is sensitive.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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