nuclear power is considered to be roughly the best energy compared with other energy sources to growing energy demand in the world. Do you agree or disagree?
Nuclear power is widespread utilized in developed countries. Some people believe that it is the best cost-effectiveness while others claim that it is extremely dangerous in terms of nuclear leakage or explosion. I partly agree with being favour of making use of nuclear power as a main energy source.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that it brings about a multitude of benefits. Nuclear power is mass produced so that people are able to exploit it without limiting and wasting natural resources unlike nonrenewable resources such as fossil fuel, oil and gases which are running out of alarming rate. Therefore, it is the best alternative for fossil fuel with regard to slashing the price of electricity derived from them. Another tangible advantage of nuclear power is that the production line is quite cleaner than others due to its reduction of discharged carbon dioxide emission which is the main culprit of air pollution. Hence, people will feel the sense of satisfaction and safety to use this kind of energy source.
On the other hand, there are several inevitable drawbacks. Firstly, nuclear power is a high technology; therefore, it requires appreciated experts and cutting-edge machines to drive it. Admittedly, in order to put it into practice, governments have to subsidise a substantial amount of national budget into researching and constructing such a tremendous production line, followed by unbalanced finance. secondly, unexpected accidents resulted from explosions are likely to trigger environmental disasters which is a chronic issue for debates. No sooner do accidental events occur than citizens in neighborhood will be forced to withstand hazardous impacts such as respiration-related diseases and lung cancer. Moreover, the next generations are highly probable to suffer inborn defects because radio-activity covering the entire areas.
In conclusion, nuclear power proves both pros and cons. Depending on economic conditions and long-term plans of each country, government can use it or apply others to meet the increasing demand of energy effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49378881988 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10764683445 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636645962733 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9743083367 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5625 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237489023874 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692691299094 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728383040757 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154893428433 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805659371618 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.