You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter,
Explain why you changed jobs
Describe your new job
Tell him/her your other news
Dear Diana,
I hope you and your family doing great. I am really sorry because I could not get a chance to keep contact with you due to busy life I was having with my job. I am writing this letter to tell you that I got a new job from a well reputed company in Melbourne.
You know that I was working in IT company as a Software Engineer more than 4 years. The last few years I had a great time in this place, but now this company has become more complex. Well, now I am really fed up with it. I was working hard and long hours at the office, but to be honest, the salary they paid to me wasn’t good. So I applied for a new job at international company that was looking for a Senior Software Engineer.
I was nervous to face to the interview, but thankfully I got passed the interview. I was facing three interviews and practical exam to select for the company. But in the end, I got a chance to join the company staff as a Senior Software Engineer. I’m so happy now, because they pay better, the working conditions are really great and it is very close to my house.
Anyway, I’m really happy to say that last month I brought a new house from Melbourne and now I’m planning to bring my parents to my new house to live with me. So now I have to stop because I have to go out to make some arrangements for my new house. We will try to meet up very soon again. Please forward my regards to your family.
Best Regards,
Anushka
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to busy life I was having with my job. I am writing this letter to tell you that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, look, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 282.0 206.0 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.18439716312 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34688556121 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528368794326 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.928417876 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4117647059 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5882352941 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88235294118 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148613438804 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479652774071 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519300514502 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970431692331 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662357871644 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.