You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
Explain why you have moved
Describe the new house
Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear John,
Hope you and your family are doing great. I’m writing this letter to inform you, that I have moved to a new house in Colombo. As you know a few months ago I applied for a loan and it has been approved two weeks ago. You know well, that I had a dream in life to buy my own house. Finally, my dream comes true. I’m really happy and so much excited. I’m sorry because I couldn’t get a chance to tell you until now.
The main purpose I have decided to change my house because it is too small for me and my family. My new house is huge, it has 5 bedrooms with two attached bathrooms and two separate bathrooms. It also has a big kitchen with pantry, dining room, living area, beautiful green garden and a big balcony with a beautiful outside view. This area has all the facilities such as gym, jogging track, supermarkets, cinemas and it is very calm and quite for a living.
I would like to invite you to visit my new house with your family on this coming weekend. I hope we can have fun and enjoy with each other.
I am waiting for you for this coming weekend.
Regards,
Anushka
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... have fun and enjoy with each other. I am waiting for you for this coming week...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, really, so, well, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34123222749 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25724800856 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601895734597 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0317019442 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4285714286 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203831600233 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697651997445 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708382315498 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133222977961 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748232059988 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.3 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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