There are obvious reason why people are not satisfied with what they have. I agree that people always want what they already have or they are never satisfied with what they have. Today's world is filled up with different technology and advertisement that make people always wish for more as a result of satisfying their desires. Another ample reason is that people want to feel better than their friends and as a result they do not want their friends to have what they have.
However, some reason why are people not satisfied with what they have? For example a man who build a big house the year 2014 will want something bigger the year 2016, because he is not satisfied with what he has even if he has a bigger house he will still want something bigger after some period of time. Though some argue that people are satisfied with what they have simply because some people can live in a small house and wear same clothe for long period of time, without moving house and changing clothe. The fact that they stay in a place for a long period of time does not mean they are satisfied with what they have, it means they do not have enough money to upgrade to the standard they desire.
The most significant reason is because humans do not appreciate what they already have and as a result they are always on the run for more things.
Beside, the feeling of something out there is better is always on the mind of humans and the tendency to get it. This unsatisfied tendency can push them into big debt that they will find difficult to cope with thereby living a miserable life for the rest of their life. For humans to live a satisfied life they need to learn to be satisfied with what they have and avoid the urge of always wanting more.
In conclusion, humans are never satisfied and can never be satisfied, because of their desire of wanting more and they want to be better than their friends which is a wrong way of living a happy life. The more things they desire, the more they kill their own happiness and run into big debt that send them to untimely death. For humans to live a peaceful and satisfied life they should show appreciation for what they have.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Line 2, column 291, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... still want something bigger after some period of time. Though some argue that people are sati...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...all house and wear same clothe for long period of time, without moving house and changing clot...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44332493703 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10726630666 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.400503778338 0.561755894193 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8684210198 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.6 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4666666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.586302805581 0.244688304435 240% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.277673504445 0.084324248473 329% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185592142414 0.0667982634062 278% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.38412835987 0.151304729494 254% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133944531499 0.056905535591 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 12.4159519038 71% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.36 8.58950901804 74% => Dale chall readability score is low.
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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