This topic asked where a foreign visitor should visit if he/she has only one day. Certainly, some people if asked would suggest the Topkapi palace while others would mention that question depends on a great deal of factors, for example, someone may be more interested in variety of traditional foods compared to historical places. As far as I am concerned, I adopt a firm position that Topkapi palace is prominent place to start.
The first reason coming to mind substantiating my point is concerned with this issue that it is a monument of Ottoman of Empire and it is one of wonders of the world which reflects the unique cultures of old times of Ottoman as well as vast number of highly valuable historic items such as spears, swords, attires, diamonds and so on. For instance, last year when I took my Korean friend to palace, luckily, we entered to the private part of it which is only permitted once or twice in 3 years, so exhibited sultan's personal belonging were seen. Moreover, we had chance to talk to museum manager who let us to touch the huge sword that was so amazing. It goes without saying that the most amazing cultural, historical place which contains in one place is the Topkapi palace.
The second worthy factor which deserve some word here is that the restaurant which is located in the palace. The view of restaurant toward the Marmara Sea and the Bosphorus that will indeed make you enjoy while eating your special meals which are made of same menu that Sultans had hundreds years ago. In addition, all guest are given some sort of small presents when they leave like imitated rings, spoon so forth. Without a shadow of doubt, even there is small fee for entrance it is one of the most prominent place to visit.
Having considered all the aforementioned grounds discussed above, I am of the opinion that Topkapi Place is priority place to visit owing to give you chance to see plethora of historical pieces from old times and make you feel amazed by wandering in the palace. I strongly advocate my factors due to they well enough convincing reasons for my approval for a stranger to get idea where a person must visit first.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... of small presents when they leave like a imitated rings, spoon so forth. Without...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, sort of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41294013374 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595800524934 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.1028486132 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.769230769 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3076923077 20.6045352989 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106032041958 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433256860499 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948508094766 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0622582327211 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481624759137 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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