You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Dear Alice,
I am writing to you with regard to your recent letter for advice either going to college or getting a job first. Being your friend for years, it is my pleasure to share my experiences with you.
Firstly, in a college you will see your classmates are as the similar old as your age, teachers or professors teach you much theory than practical skills and technique, which may not implement in real society. Besides, your peers around you usually do not have much real social experience.
Getting jobs first will have many advantages for you. Thus, I extremely suggest getting a job is better ideas for you. in the work, you can learn practical experience, skills from your colleagues or experts, who are endless resources to you; earlier building great relationships in your network bring you a great opportunity to expose yourself in your career. But at last, you may earn money from work and broaden your work at the same time without wasting time in textbooks.
I remember you have great skills in software developing and IT knowledge, that are great demanded, I assure you that you will get a good position either international enterprises or local corporation.
Finally, you had better be ready with your resume and cover letter, I will glad to review them, or please feel free to contact me.
I look forward to hearing from you,
Yours sincerely,
Salus
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... getting a job is better ideas for you. in the work, you can learn practical exper...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, look, may, so, thus, as for, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91101694915 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57522210464 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614406779661 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3656241401 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.363636364 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 4.34317383033 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319658936494 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155221935952 0.0766984524023 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101178919917 0.0603063233224 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177470217011 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091379769908 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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