You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.
Say where you think you left the papers.
Explain why they are so important
Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing you with regard to my papers left in your hotel after attending a meeting, the papers are very important for me because I have to do some reports. I would appreciate very much If you can find it and sent it back to me.
I am Ms. Salus work for ABC Corporation as a software developer, attended a meeting at your hotel in a technical seminar, which was held on 10th Dec 2016, I left my paper on my chair of meeting room No.218.
Unfortunately, the papers included my personal security information and company private security password, whose data was sent to me. It is very significant for me, at end of this month we will require the papers to draw reports, and login some government websites for auditing.
I would appreciate your help very much if you could send it back ABC company through the registered mail as soon as possible to this address: No. 200 Douglas St., Victoria B.C., Canada.
Thanks for your assistance,
Yours faithfully,
Salus
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... can find it and sent it back to me. I am Ms. Salus work for ABC Corporation a...
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Line 9, column 70, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (ABC) must be used with a third-person verb: 'companies'.
Suggestion: companies
...very much if you could send it back ABC company through the registered mail as soon as ...
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Line 9, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ail as soon as possible to this address: No. 200 Douglas St., Victoria B.C., Cana...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69886363636 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64545234887 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642045454545 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2747978094 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.142857143 76.5299724578 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203446003095 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904373126954 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075088234384 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102850706728 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908400170504 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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