Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion what are the qualities of a good neighbor?
Since times immemorial, most of people has chosen to live in communities, which are formed by several neighbors. Nowadays, cities are diverse and has a lot of different types of neighbors composed by people with different interest and costumes. In my opinion most of the qualities that makes some neighbors better than other are related with safety, transportation and amount of green areas
Firstly, being safe. In order to enjoy all the best of any neighbor people need to feel that the place where they live in, is safe, otherwise people will not leave home fearing to be robbed, raped or assaulted. For instance, there are many neighbors that, despite having a lot of parks, are not being used by people because they feel unsafe.
Secondly, alternatives of transportation? This is a question very important to consider when analyzing any neighbor. No matter if people commute by public transport, car or bicycle, any neighbor likely to be considered as a good one, should have one or several advantages of transportation, for example, good highway access, or a better tram/bus routes.
At last, gardens! Parks!. How great is to walk around the neighbor with a nice view of well cared gardens and parks? Moreover, for me parks are one of the greatest places to take the children to, or simply to admire. For example, the shadows of the trees in the park provide an excellent place to read in the summer. Without any doubt, is a necessary condition for any to tier neighbor to have several, cared and well-designed parks and gardens.
In summary, choosing a neighbor is a tough task where people should consider, among others, how safe the neighbor is, analyze the transportation alternatives and the quantity of Public Park available. Although, the reasons above mentioned are important, there are quite a lot more to be considered before to make the final decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
Since times immemorial, most of people has chosen to live in communities, whic...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ute by public transport, car or bicycle, any neighbor likely to be considered as ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ered before to make the final decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in summary, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 43.0788530466 19% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98089171975 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7835779528 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582802547771 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.817321087 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.266666667 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253494058948 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779928997035 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602931128481 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141945477763 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048962317814 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.