The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
By the passage of time, the world has changed dramatically, and people are become more educated than previous centuries. People of different countries are more aware of their right. As we know, in almost every country of the world has democracy system, which means the citizens of country have right to elect their favorite person as a president or Prime Minister of their country. And that particular person is also answerable to the nation of all his decision, he take during his regime.
In the history, we have already seen various type of Governments, the most famous is the Mughal Emperor government. History tells us that Indian Mughal Emperor are most intelligent, they rule the whole Asia and provide the best system of government , in which all people even he belongs to any sects or religion have equal rights. In democracy, people can elect as well as, they can question to their elected person. If we take an example of third world countries, where corruption, bribe and breaking the law is not a big deal, in those countries people cannot ask or question the authority.
However, we have some example the people have the right and can ask the authority about project, about taxes , about investment of money, we have seen that people in those countries are living a good life. They have all kinds of facilities available. Even their governments are working to enhance their life style. It shows that their society are more educated, they elect their President on the basis merit without any cast, race or emotional attachments.
To sum up the above discussions we can say that the society standards raised when people of a society can ask the authority and questioned them about their issues, and about the taxes they give to the government. In this way, the well-being of society enhanced.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 467, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'takes'.
Suggestion: takes
...e to the nation of all his decision, he take during his regime. In the history, w...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nd provide the best system of government , in which all people even he belongs to ...
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Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the authority about project, about taxes , about investment of money, we have seen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, third, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 307.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90879478827 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54490365211 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530944625407 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3111835189 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.642857143 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183119424499 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068081785566 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07066420097 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124626094887 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838830979122 0.0667264976115 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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