The table below shows information about the Eiffel Tower and Peteonas Towers.
The table shows the information about two popular and talles tower: The Eiffel Tower and Petroans Towers.
The Eiffel Tower located at the France and Patronas towers at the Malaysia. The Eiffel Tower construction was completed in the 1889 and the Patronas Towers completed in the 1998. The Petronas Towers time taken for construction 4 years and material used concrete steel, aluminium and glass and almost 1500 feet height. When the Eiffel Tower completed in 2 years and was made of wrought iron and almost 1000 feet hieght.
The Eiffel Tower enjoyed the world's tallest building status till 1930. After than the Petronas Towers take over tallest building status 1998 to 2004. Moreover, the Eiffel Tower construction cost was 1.5 US $ million compared to low the Petronas Towers cost were 1.6 billion US $.
Finally, the Eiffel Tower has 3 floors, 2 lifts and 10000 tonnes weight. When, the Petronas Towers have 88 floors, 78 elevators and 30000 tonnes weight.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'tower' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'towers'.
Suggestion: towers
...nformation about two popular and talles tower: The Eiffel Tower and Petroans Towers. ...
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Line 2, column 76, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ce and Patronas towers at the Malaysia. The Eiffel Tower construction was completed...
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Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... Patronas Towers completed in the 1998. The Petronas Towers time taken for construc...
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Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the tallest'.
Suggestion: worlds the tallest
...t hieght. The Eiffel Tower enjoyed the worlds tallest building status till 1930. After than t...
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rlds tallest building status till 1930. After than the Petronas Towers take over tall...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...el Tower construction cost was 1.5 US $ million compared to low the Petronas Towers cos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 33.7804878049 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05031446541 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32138650536 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.9730276629 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.3 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336153458229 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153058510295 0.103423049105 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145489272194 0.0843802449381 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251312474299 0.15604864568 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186392872047 0.0819641961636 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.