do you agree or disagree?it is better to travel abroad to visit different countries when you are young than old.
The question is whether it is better to travel abroad to visit different countries when you are young or not. Everyone in consideration to his private view point can maintain a specific view toward this issue; however with regard to its cons and pros, I am inclined to affirm that the advantages that traveling in young ages can bring us outweigh to old ages. My arguments and reasons are listed below which will strengthen my point of view:
To begin with, it is axiomatic that the first and the most important goal of traveling is that people can look for new and useful experiences. Nobody could overlook this reality that the trip can add to us extra life's lessons as becoming to an independent person, setting under pressure, observing and evaluating diverse cultures, food, monuments and wild areas and list goes on. As old saying goes it is vital to travel if you are willing to become from a crude person to rough person; hence valuable experiences can guide us in continuation of life. It is obvious that people need to gain worthwhile experiences when they are young.
The second reason why I advocate this matter lies the fact the traveling improves interpersonal skills. For instance, making new friends is the most desirable wish of everyone; consequently one should notice to the approaches which can help people to access to this begged. On the other hand people require such the friendships in young ages to share the most exciting things with them.
I am going to empower my arguments with following the discussion. There are a bit of different point here. Physically, when people enter to old epoch, the condition of their body does not allow them to enjoy miscellaneous things. Except a few percentage of older men, majority of old generation are always bored and growler; subsequently it is worth in traveling in springtime.
By taking all above mentioned reasons, this conclusion could be drawn that traveling in young age provides has high weigh compared with older ages because it provides numerous profits as getting experiences which will help us in the future, creating new relationship and also exploiting from a fresh body.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'bits'?
Suggestion: bits
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun percentage seems to be countable; consider using: 'few percentages'.
Suggestion: few percentages
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, hence, however, if, look, second, so, then, while, for instance, to begin with, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92857142857 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6902548801 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598901098901 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4683537772 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.142857143 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.45110844103 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205319703728 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828629282135 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134734095157 0.0737576698707 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106189710132 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795947677689 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.