You travelled by plane last week and your luggage was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company.
Write to the airline explain what happened.
Describe your luggage and tell them what was in it.
Find out what they are going to do about it.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter about the luggage which was lost last month while travelling from Sydney to Brisbane on 20th December 2016 from Qantas Airline for my business trip. I arrived at Brisbane airport and I was waiting for my luggage but I didn’t receive my luggage after waiting for 1 and half hour.
I was very disappointed because and when I talked to the airline representative they told me your luggage has been misplaced and he told me he will find out what had happened. The luggage is black in colour and it has a name tag which has all my details and inside the luggage, I have my business documents which contain confidential and there are some clothes too.
I waited for around two weeks but I didn’t hear any message from you so, can you please find out what is happening and as soon as possible I want my luggage back it is important for me to find out the luggage. I have already given you my address last time can you please send me at the same address. I hope I will get my luggage soon.
Yours sincerely,
Preeti Sharma.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 192, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: black
...d out what had happened. The luggage is black in colour and it has a name tag which has all my ...
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Line 6, column 306, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...you please send me at the same address. I hope I will get my luggage soon. You...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46700507614 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46980267938 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593908629442 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0632863421 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295000738889 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120620734273 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658680209751 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19032874522 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143218642026 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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