In some cultures the old age is more valued, while in some cultures youth is more valued. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In some countries, they appreciate old people, while in some countries, they think young people can contribute more to the society.
To my point of view, the old age has a number of characteristics that hardly any young have. First, it is the great amount of experience and life truths. Old people, of course, must have undergone many problems in their life, so what they get from them is beyond what young people can imagine. Second, they have the ability to keep calm when facing up many issues in their life. Youth sometimes may be too ebullient to take decisions to deal with their problems. Last but not least, old people always take the long-term consequences into consideraton, which is crucial in planning to do something.
On the other hand, the young generation have enough qualifications which can help them integrate into the modern world.
They are creative and dynamic, and always have courage to make their dreams come true and to change this world into a better place to live. Moreover, their flexibility does help them adapt easily to new living environments and enables them to keep up with the development speed of this forever-changing world.
In conclusion, I believe a developed society is the one which is controlled between the strong points of the old age and youth. Furthermore, it is important for the old to help the young promote their abilities as well as make up for their weaknesses and vice versa.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, well, while, in conclusion, of course, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72063397565 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0151582075 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104703077194 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406013005343 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581326759016 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659657946193 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729923512093 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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