Society is a small unit of world.There are both kind of people either old age or young are live.In this view, it is considered that old citizens are more precious and valuable in some cultures.However, others given preference to younger ones.From my prospective, older are more important in society.This essay intends to elaborate the both view points.
To commence with, old people play the important role to manage the unity of society. They have the great amount of knowledge by virtue of which they control the society. They are easily tackle the difficult situations.Even more they have the experience which they gain from their life.so they are important part of society as well as culture.
On the other hand,young people are far more close to modern era.They have more knowledge about modern technology as they spent their time with this.so, some people think that they are more important to control the society. Further they have more zeal to cope with problems.So,they are more valued.
To conclude,no doubt,youngsters are the indispensable part of society, yet old people cannot be undiagnosed.They have the respectful place in society .so,old one should more important then their opposite gender.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, well, kind of, no doubt, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24742268041 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01619957543 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572164948454 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.739325923 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.428571429 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189304839382 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971101923591 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767756866181 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128871442104 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075124198152 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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