Computers are the integral part of human's life.So,a fair portion of masses say that skills related to computer should be the part of schooling education as a primary subject just like the reading, writing and maths.In my point if view, it is a positive approach so I agree with the statement.
To commence with, the first and foremost benefit of computer in schools is that these help them to learn it,Nowadays, all the things are computerised, so it is quit essential to learn the computer Inspite that, no one can succeed in life.Futhurmore, due to technology, computer become vast and it is a better choice to opt it as a career.To cite an example,there are many companies and industries which give give chance of employment to computer engineers such as Google.
Turning attention to further benefits,computers are the spice of various functions and have a great data which help people to get knowledge of world.For instance, one can easily book the ticket for train without going station.So, these type of things can easily taught by teachers to students which enable them to use time safely.
To conclude, no doubt, other subjects such as science and maths has their special features and lead towards great future but computer has also it's own benefits which provides the equal chance for success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for instance, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96803652968 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84631325309 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648401826484 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.2662323975 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 272.0 106.682146367 255% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.75 20.7667163134 264% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.25 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206804523273 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118614794794 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824691653332 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118614794794 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824691653332 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.4 13.0946893788 225% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 25.13 50.2224549098 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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