It is believed by some scientists that on the other planets the intelligent life forms and they should be contacted through messages while other found it nither good or beneficial idea.In my point of view it should be risky to contact aliens on earth.This essay intends to elaborate both the view point of this topic.
On the first hand,scientists think that the alien bare more intelligent as well as fast then the human being.If they come on earth then can help to produce the equipment and gadgets which helps the mankind to succeed .To cite an example it may be possible to discovered to louche time machine in future with the help of these species.
On the other hand ,rest of scientists think that the enormous person from other planets can be cause of danger for earth as well as mankind.They might be full of superial powers,causing trouble for human.Apart from this ,they may be use their powers for destruction of mankind instead for welfare.
To conclude,no doubt the aliens are more intelligent but can be course of great problem.If they come on earth ,probably distroy the life of earth ..So,This idea is another good as well as safe for planet earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, then, well, while, apart from, no doubt, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78217821782 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61906921942 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584158415842 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.7310171691 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 241.5 106.682146367 226% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.5 20.7667163134 243% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.75 7.06120827912 336% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298285134889 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180681995468 0.084324248473 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10909789627 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180681995468 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10909789627 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.3 13.0946893788 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 37.65 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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