Some people think that young people should go to universities to further their education while others think they should been encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc, to serve society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
it is believed by a fair proportion of masses that for further studies of adults, it is essential to send them universities. However, other holds the opposite view by argued that they should been motivated to do society well fair work. From my prospective, both higher studies and security of society is crucial for adults. This essay intends to elaborate the both sides of view.
adults are the building blocks of nation and society as they are younger generation,doing all the hard work by great spirit and zeal. According to first part of people, study is essential part of life, without which one cannot be succeed in life. universities provide great sources of knowledge and experiences, which play the vital role to develop one's personality and future. so, adults should be go to such institutes.
On other side, remaining part of people believed that, society is important place to live. without its development, no one can called as successor.Due to hike in prices of all thinks, other workers ask for high payments, which are not affordable for a common man. so, they think, it is the duty of youngsters to do work for security of society rather than go to universities for educational purposes.
To conclude, no doubt,work for society is important,yet, education has also its own demand and place in society. so, young people should try to do both the tasks such as they continue their study by doing society's welfare work in their spare time,so that their wish( further education ) and duty( society work) done continually.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, well, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9496124031 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77955624817 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7346290578 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2307692308 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226784265318 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782558299978 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665916625497 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137058942789 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529195632674 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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