It is considered that to built artists creativity, there is a need of freedom for them. A fair part of people believe that it is necessary to provide freedom in artist field to show their various ideas and thinking. From my prospective, this view has both the lighter as well as brighter sides, so I agree with statement to certain extent. This essay intends to elaborate both view points of mine.
To commence with, it is essential to have liberty in artist's field due to number of reasons. One of them is ,maintaining peace in society as well as in nation. Artists have the right to represent their art related to today's evils and problems which can easily be understand by commander people. Result of which is to clear evil and creat peace in a particular country. To cite an example, illiterate people are more found in undeveloped sides of country. In such areas, the work of art is represent to aware them and they will took steps to overcome their problems.
However, it has some disadvantages also. Non-confinement in artist's work can leads them towards the death, which is done by political or other parties. For example, artist paint a picture in which a person sell drugs to others, then such type of people are, undoubtly, cause of danger for artists.
To conclude,no doubt is is right of everyone to live and work with Liberty, yet it has sometimes both the losses as well as benefits, which effects someone's life. So, one should try to do work without showing his me or identity in artist' field.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...pective, this view has both the lighter as well as brighter sides, so I agree with stateme...
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Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...due to number of reasons. One of them is ,maintaining peace in society as well as ...
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Line 2, column 489, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'represented'.
Suggestion: represented
...ntry. In such areas, the work of art is represent to aware them and they will took steps ...
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Line 2, column 527, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
...s represent to aware them and they will took steps to overcome their problems. Howe...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ms. However, it has some disadvantages also. Non-confinement in artists work can le...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , no
...ause of danger for artists. To conclude,no doubt is is right of everyone to live a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: is
...nger for artists. To conclude,no doubt is is right of everyone to live and work with...
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Line 4, column 114, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...y, yet it has sometimes both the losses as well as benefits, which effects someones life. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, well, for example, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59154379819 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588014981273 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2983816757 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0666666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204599063434 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639048218745 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588952730154 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115010175584 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537593839905 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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