News stories on TV and in newspaper are often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this.
Nowadays, new stores play an important role in broadening our knowledge as well as informing us of everyday occurrences around the world. Most news articles are also added with several strike images. However, it is argued that the photographs are more valuable and useful than words in articles. The following paragraphs will discuss this view and my own perception.
It is reasonable to believe that the photographs of a news story are more effective in contrast with the numerous words. First of all, pictures can express the situation of a certain event or incident more directly and efficiently, as people are able to obtain the basic information by merely spending a few seconds browsing those photographs. In addition, a series of researches have also demonstrated that most people have impressive proficiency in assimilating the information or data depicted by pictures rather than words, since human memory is more sensitive to visual images. Therefore, even after a long period, the memory of a certain news story still can be triggered by going through relevant pictures.
On the other hand, some people believe that words are the more useful and valuable part of a news story. The words provide readers with more comprehensive and specific information that contributes to promoting the understanding of the situation of a certain occasion. A research news article, for instance, the data results can be directly displayed by pictograms, but the painstaking procedures and conclusion must be described with words for readers to comprehend. In the light of such fact, pictures sometimes are solely the auxiliary components of a news article.
In my opinion, words and pictures are the equally important parts of a news story. Pictures enables readers to quickly and easily acquire and remember the basic information while words are beneficial to the comprehension of the whole article.
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Essay evaluation report
A research news article, for instance, the data results can be directly displayed by pictograms, but the painstaking procedures and conclusion must be described with words for readers to comprehend.
description: what is the verb for 'A research news article'?
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 163 200 //need more unique words.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 303 350
No. of Characters: 1561 1500
No. of Different Words: 163 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.172 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.152 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.87 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 117 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 72 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.643 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.742 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.786 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.36 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.562 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.072 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in contrast, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29702970297 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9450004582 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541254125413 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.44671197 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.642857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2857142857 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215791337766 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759197127256 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539367998638 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1209358976 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541586864538 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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