Internet is one of the masterpiece of human in the current century that deals with every aspect of our daily life. I strongly agree with the statement that the Internet is the foremost source of information that offers valuable themes to everyone. In this essay, I will try to demonstrate my points by the following reasons.
Firstly, these days most of researches and projects in the universities are done by computer and Internet. They utilize Internet to collect information about a wide variety of subjects. This trend leads researchers to not only save their time and but also have access to the database of many scientific institutions. If they resort to traditional sources of information, such as library and newspapers, they face a couple of limitations, such as a lack of helpful books and loss of the valid knowledge, while the concentration of a large quantity of information in the worldwide network, namely Internet, nowadays removes the similar problems.
Secondly, because of advancement in technology, these days many companies introduce hundreds of their products to the market. In this case, Internet, as a source of valuable information, is the best method for consumers to get enough and useful data through companies’ websites and similarly companies are advertising their products via social networks, such as Facebook, YouTube, and so forth, to reach out to the potential customers. As a result, all of these achievements are possible if people are bombarded with a great deal of the worthwhile information by Internet.
However, without any doubt, accessibility to much information may occasionally be destructive and harmful to young generations, who are at the growth age both mentally and physically. We know that most of immoral films and video clips these days are released by Internet. Such hug negative things available in the Internet causes children and adolescents to go astray by watching them, instead of focusing on the lessons in schools and developing their ideas and thoughts, and they will consequently destroy youth’s life. This is a negative side of accessing too much information.
In summary, I cannot deny the drawbacks of much information provided to people via internet, such as affecting young generation negatively, but accessibility to hug amount of information brings more convenience to students for performing their researches and assignments and to companies for
selling their products
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the researches') or simply say ''most researches''.
Suggestion: most of the researches; most researches
...llowing reasons. Firstly, these days most of researches and projects in the universities are do...
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Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...wever, without any doubt, accessibility to much information may occasionally be de...
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Line 9, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hes and assignments and to companies for selling their products
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, while, in summary, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2081.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37726098191 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13065065109 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56330749354 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.5248891496 48.9658058833 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.733333333 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199047143999 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067108571613 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055209878386 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946520504285 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482542501576 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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