A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that human must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
As we all know, animals have always been a part of human life and how we should treat them is a debatable question. While some people believe that animals are significantly necessary for a good life, in my view, human beings should respect animals and believe that they are not here only for our uses and convenience
On the one hand, it is commonly believed that human life needs animal to progress effectively. It is true to say that people needs food is indispensable in people’s life , particularly meat and fish. That is to say, animals play a significant role in human beings healthy daily diets of human beings . What’s more, in medical and scientific research people have to employ animals as experiment object, because scientists cannot apply new inventions right on human beings before they completely understand their consequences and side effects. Mice , which is are considered a replicate of human, is are a great illustration for this opinion.
On the other hand, I believe that there should not be any differences in the right of living in respect between human beings and animals. Through a lot of documentary films and scientific studies, we all know that animals also have emotions and feelings. It does not matter whether they are wildlife or domestic animals, they seem to know how to basically react to whatever happenings around their living environment, including happiness and pain. For instance, if dogs and cats are adorable and loyal pets, tigers, lions and deer also have their own families and their own flocks to love and protect. That is the reason why I personally think that every kind of animals deserves to have human being’s respects.
In conclusion, whereas currently people are still pretty much dependent on animals for a good life, from my point of view, animals are worthy and valuable and we should respect the original nature of their own lives . In distant future, it is predicted that with human being’s intelligence, we will soon come to new inventions to replace the role of animals, leave them a peaceful life but still be able to maintain a high standard of living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my view, it is true, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98603351955 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74052780664 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541899441341 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.2171050181 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.307692308 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5384615385 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369959731506 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130560822524 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064451024951 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236187144622 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532304322744 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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