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Essay evaluation report
Although, supporters of this type of diet feel that it contains enough proteins; but research has proved the amount of amino acids in vegetables to be nowhere near as the animal proteins.
Description: don't put 'although' 'but' in one sentence.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 375 350
No. of Characters: 1909 1500
No. of Different Words: 242 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.401 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.091 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.674 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 147 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 109 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.522 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.286 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.571 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.045 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Thank you sir for your
Thank you sir for your valuable comments.
Dear sir, I would like to ask
Dear sir, I would like to ask if I need to improve my grammar? I look forward to your reply. Thank you.
You sometimes have little
You sometimes have little issues on grammar, but it is not serious and it is tolerable. Your essays are just getting 'perfect' in the view of essay e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23733333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76009146386 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642666666667 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.4887401057 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.933333333 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15056202494 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484142591596 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627948958353 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912054185919 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952157577165 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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