Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make ?
Has this become a positive or negative development
At the beginning of 2000's, The develop of technology have been starting, than nobody stop it. It has been still growing like avalanche. Naturally, technology has been a part of our lifes. Nowadays, people have been discussing about effects of technology. I think, technology is really big opportunity for people who is really know to use
Firstly, technology gives many advanteges. Therefore people who want to meet on real life,but who dont have chances, at least they talks on unreal area. If you are living without your family, technology gives so many chances for find any solutions of this problem. I'm a mechanical engineer who have been working for 7 years and living without my family. I talk my parents and friends almost every day. As well as, we use to technology, when we have wonder some relatives.
There are some negatif things too. You might be asocial person ıf you dont arrange your time limit for use technology. In this times, some hospitals have opened departmant which is called social media effects. The fact that, many people have psychological problem about this issue. Therefore we must to know our limit otherwise we have possibility become a asocial person. And this problem effects all our relationships.
As I said before, we must to know value of technology that is big chance for connection to people. If we don't know, this thing can give bad effects to person who is push to use limit. Finally, save your time and learn relationships with technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
At the beginning of 2000s, The develop of technology have been starting, than ...
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Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'nobody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'stops'.
Suggestion: stops
...hnology have been starting, than nobody stop it. It has been still growing like aval...
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Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...ig opportunity for people who is really know to use Firstly, technology gives man...
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Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...stly, technology gives many advanteges. Therefore people who want to meet on real life,...
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Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ny advanteges. Therefore people who want to meet on real life,but who dont have ...
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Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...e people who want to meet on real life,but who dont have chances, at least they t...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...who want to meet on real life,but who dont have chances, at least they talks on u...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to meet on real life,but who dont have chances, at least they talks on unreal a...
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Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'talk'
Suggestion: talk
...t who dont have chances, at least they talks on unreal area. If you are living witho...
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Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...for find any solutions of this problem. Im a mechanical engineer who have been wor...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...too. You might be asocial person ıf you dont arrange your time limit for use techno...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you dont arrange your time limit for use technology. In this times, some hospital...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...your time limit for use technology. In this times, some hospitals have opened depar...
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Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...psychological problem about this issue. Therefore we must to know our limit otherwise we ...
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Line 5, column 297, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... problem about this issue. Therefore we must to know our limit otherwise we have possib...
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Line 5, column 357, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...it otherwise we have possibility become a asocial person. And this problem effect...
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Line 7, column 22, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... relationships. As I said before, we must to know value of technology that is big ch...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... chance for connection to people. If we dont know, this thing can give bad effects...
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Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nce for connection to people. If we dont know, this thing can give bad effects t...
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to people. If we dont know, this thing can give bad effects to person who is pu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, really, so, still, therefore, well, at least, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93253968254 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65562185042 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4337442438 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.4210526316 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2631578947 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142441478439 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472059803513 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424876086697 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931743680897 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145486096853 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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