The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980.Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The supplied table enumerates the number of prisoners in different countries, named as, Canada, Australia, Great Britain, United States and New Zealand from 1930 to 1980. The highlighting feature is that there is a mild increase in number of detainees each year in Great Britain.
As it is observed from the table, Canada had the maximal figure of prisoners in the year 1930 with 120 thousands. In this year, New Zealand and United States was on the same position with 100 thousands prisoners. With roughly 130 thousands, United States enjoys the highest rank in 1940 whereas Canada, Australia and New Zealand had curtailed its prisoners. In 1950, only United States declined its prisoners with 18 thousands. Rest of the countries had a slight increase in their number of prisoners.
Moreover, in 1960, again, United States was on top rank virtually 120 thousands. Canada had a tedious decrease with 18 thousands and all other countries shows an increase in number of captives. Great Britain, Australia and New Zealand had same number of detainees in the year 1970 with 65 thousands. Only Australia depicts decline in figure of prisoners with 12 thousands whereas all other countries show dramatic increase in number of prisoners.
In summary, United States has the highest number of captives in the year 1980 with 138 thousands and in 1930, Great Britain has the minutest number of detainees well nigh to 30 thousands.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed as, Canada, Australia, Great Britain, United States and New Zealand from 1930 ...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he year 1930 with 120 thousands. In this year, New Zealand and United States was ...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ted States was on top rank virtually 120 thousands. Canada had a tedious decrease...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, whereas, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14102564103 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6118384148 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452991452991 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9521286652 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.25 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0601682483528 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294577043886 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312013927854 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0468973788367 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110158553389 0.0819641961636 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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