You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter.
1. Introduce yourself
2. Describe your plans for the party
3. Invite your neighbour to come
Dear Mr. Tharaka,
I am writing to you with great pleasure of introducing myself. I am Aravindhan and shifted to this new house last week. My family is not large and complicated, as it only consists of myself, wife and two small children. I am an Accountant attached to a private organization and being there for last five years.
In addition, I have organized a small celebration to introduce my new residence to my parents, relatives and loved ones. There will be around twenty invitees. Furthermore, I have also arranged a private music group to entertain the guests as well. Therefore, I am concerned about the inconveniences it will cause to you and to your family.
Apart from that, I am glad to invite you and your family to this party. This will be a great opportunity to understand each other. Not only that, but also our family members can socialize, which will help, if need arise. More importantly, I guarantee you that, the day will be fun and memorable one as well.
Please accept my apologies for any trouble, due to this organization and hope to see you all on that day.
Thanking you
Yours sincerely,
R. Aravindhan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79396984925 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83945834159 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618090452261 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.7762744031 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.1428571429 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2142857143 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172119303294 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690847591685 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906363988506 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843423584188 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342759196983 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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