It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
From a young age, kids ought to be provided education to study the variance between correct and unsuitable concepts. Penalties often need to be introduced to assist them master this disparity. I am totally in favour of this idea and this essay will discuss the appropriate type of punishments that can be followed by guardians and trainers in schools.
To begin with, in early age, children are generally tempted readily by the attractive surroundings and often settling to big health issues. According to the research, as brain functions are not fully matured, the majority of them fail to analys...
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 355 350
No. of Characters: 1818 1500
No. of Different Words: 224 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.341 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.121 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.872 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 129 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 109 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 82 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.864 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.467 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.277 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.502 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.054 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Dear sir, I would like to ask
Dear sir, I would like to ask that how much I was able to achieve the task response for this essay? Thank you sir.
A little bit issue. at first,
A little bit issue. at first, you wrote:
...exposures to colourful video games and tempting cartoons, and eating junk foods, ...
while after a while, you only mention technological products :
'Children, therefore, must be educated whenever they seek to expose to vulnerable technological products such as computers, televisions and so on.'
it is not so consistent. So the overall score is 8.0 out of 9. But it is still a great essay.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'exposure'?
Suggestion: exposure
...emplified by an unintentional prolonged exposures to colourful video games and tempting c...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26478873239 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95218793582 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622535211268 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3342541366 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.6 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212679155969 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616273135935 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035166399511 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122257791507 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00934639530373 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.