Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.
When it comes to the issue of that is better for the children to choose jobs similar to their parents jobs, some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people have different opinions. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that it is better for the children to choose jobs similar to their parents jobs because there are so many reasons to support my point of view. This short essay will demonstrate some points regarding this issue in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that it is better for the children to choose jobs similar to their parents jobs. Most of the children consider their parent as a models so, they used to take their parents advise. If the children jobs similar to their parents jobs, they get a chance to ask and learn from their parents in their practical life not just in their daily life. Eventually, they will get a lot of benefits from their parents experience.
Another reason why I advocate that it is better for the children to get jobs similar to their parents jobs is the high competition. The life now is very rapid and there is a highly competition between people which makes growing in new business require a lot of effort, money and time. If the children continue in their parents jobs, they will consume the time and the money that the need in order to progress in their new jobs.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that the children have a background about their parents jobs because they grew up seeing what their parents do and how they work. So, the children can estimated what is the advantages and the disadvantages for their new career all this will help them to solve any problem that they may face.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion that says, although people who hold the opposite opinion may have the right to believe in that, but my opiion and other people opinions are overwhelmingly too much to be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('highly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('competition') instead of another adjective.
...The life now is very rapid and there is a highly competition between people which makes growing in n...
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Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hey work. So, the children can estimated what is the advantages and the disadvant...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, regarding, so, well, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66120218579 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38787185118 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469945355191 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5876507925 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.857142857 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462034096504 0.236089414692 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193794713122 0.076458572812 253% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144335932392 0.0737576698707 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259505641883 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142357764233 0.0645574589148 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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