You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
• describe the situation
• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
I am writing this letter to draw your kind attention towards the hindrances faced by me. My roommate whom I share the room with creates lots of issues and the current circumstances has become unbearable for me at present.
I am fed up with my roommate habits and his unplanned motive of calling up his friends late in the night. My exams are approaching in the next few weeks and it would be really difficult for me to study to score good marks in the exams. I need peace to work to get great scores in the exams.
I would like to have one separate single room where I can prepare for my exams without any disturbance. I would be greatful to you if you can help me get rid of this obstacle and finding a quiet and calm room for my studies.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best Regards,
FaizalReza
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... friends late in the night. My exams are approaching in the next few weeks and it...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e for my exams without any disturbance. I would be greatful to you if you can hel...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... quiet and calm room for my studies. I am looking forward to hearing from you ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 673.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34193548387 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42978397313 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638709677419 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6871996381 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7777777778 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172964411184 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642175650971 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557983319559 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103092117731 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346034782583 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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