Recent studies shown that people with high blood pressure also tend to eat junk foods that are high in unhealthy fats. some people argue that increasing the price of such foods would help to lower the number of people with high blood pressure. Do you agree or disagree ? share any personal experiences you have had.
It is a well-known fact that health problems associated with obesity is increasing in an alarming rate all over the world. According to many people increasing the price of junk foods would reduce the number of people with the health problems like blood pressure. I agree with the above opinion. The reasons to favour this opinion are explored in the following essay.
First of all, increasing the cost of fast foods will push the people away from it and will find an alternatives for that. For example, when I was in university, a vegetarian restaurant is opened on campus that provided healthy dishes for cheap rate in an effort to raise the awareness of healthy foods. As a college student without much money, I found the prices of dishes are affordable and became a regular customer of that establishment. Thus, it proves according to my experience, consumers are sensitive to price and can encouraged to eat healthy foods when it's price is low.
In addition to this, raising the price of unhealthy foods will discourage people to buy it more frequently. To cite an example, on my summer vacation I had a part time job in MacDonald's. During this time, the shop offered a double promotion on burgers that for two weeks it is available for half price. And i noticed that, many people rushed to the shop and consumed these burgers, which is rich in unhealthy fats, at least three times than normal. It is returned to normal when the price of burgers reached before promotion. Thus, increasing the price of junk foods will reduce the number of consumers.
As seen above, price adjustment could be an effective way to discourage the people for the intake of unhealthy foods. I hope this idea should put on practice widely in the countries where obesity is a major problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an alternative' or simply 'alternatives'?
Suggestion: an alternative; alternatives
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... example, on my summer vacation I had a part time job in MacDonalds. During this time, th...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, thus, well, at least, for example, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77922077922 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60445471224 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542207792208 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4259791678 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24373902088 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826455680654 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100235557383 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149052432873 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760494707305 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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