Living in big cities can cause some problems. Address some problems and suggest solutions.
There is no doubt that living in major municipalities has several benefits for denizens. However, this could feasibly provoke serious problems and that have to be faced. This essay will address these pressing issues and suggest solutions with the purpose of dealing with them.
Taking into consideration,communter living in vast cities usually have to handle many difficulties, such as a colossal quantity of vehicles aggressively moving around which resulted from traffic congestion. For instance, in HCM city, on a daily basis, there are over 5 million people into traffic and that have provoked gridlocks. Another factor contributes to this is the cost of living. Individuals generally have to pay more for housing, transportation and healthcare services. As a result, citizens are not only given stress but aslo fatigue due to expenses and this could implausibly incapacitate their ability at work.
However, to tackle these pressing issues, some measures could be taken into reflection. The very first of them is the governments to invest money into expanding mainstreamed roads to provide drivers with have larger roadways. Additionally, encouraging commuters to use overt vehicles such buses or subways. Then, such level of traffic density would possibly be mitigated and the quality of air might be better. Furthermore, in terms of contending with the high living expenses, decision-makers could implement regulations to support communal services to help all habitants. Take "Binh on thi truong" programme in Vietnam as an example, it helps people by supply information about all tips to reduce the living costs in many fields such as transportation or goods. Conspicuously, products that are manufactured by local companies which affordable or shortcut going to expected destination.
In conclusion, i believe living in such large cities brings about problematic issues which hard to be handled. From my perspective, the authorities must open cities to be bigger and erect more departments to support citizens financially and efficiently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , communter
... with them. Taking into consideration,communter living in vast cities usually have to h...
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Line 4, column 877, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'expect'
Suggestion: expect
...s which affordable or shortcut going to expected destination. In conclusion, i believ...
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Line 6, column 16, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...expected destination. In conclusion, i believe living in such large cities bri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57643312102 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20721509261 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649681528662 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1729823652 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103360901203 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283178491272 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030440216022 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0641278762953 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254489332567 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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