Every culture around the globe has its own history. And it is true that some practices in history relevant for all time, while others are not. This essay completely agrees with the fact that the practices in the past may not find relevant in the modern times because of the reasons mentioned in the folo=lowing paragraphs.
First of all, nowadays people are educated comparing to the past. Subsequently, they find some practices in the are absurd. In the past most of the Indian women were confined in the four walls of their house, they did not pursue a career. However now the things changed most of the new generation women in the India is earn an income for their families is an example. Nowadays women around the globe rubbing shoulders with men in every walks of life is a clear and significant change in terms of women's role in society. Thus, viewpoint towards women's role in the society changed tremendously as the time passed is a clear indication of people's attitude change towards the false practise in the past.
Another point to highlight is, 50 years before people seldom travel abroad countries in order to study or for a job. They found hard to leave their parents and relatives and stay abroad. But in modern days people travel extensively for work, study, and tourism. People graduated from local colleges and refused any job offer from abroad and lead a family life with their relatives is a clear example.
To conclude, I strongly practices will change as the time passes some practices that we follow now may feel pointless for the future generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, thus, while, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80514705882 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42869494748 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566176470588 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4900948842 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3571428571 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146500708327 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499219815368 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419611126024 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843591151067 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321838408075 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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